| Reviews for The Way of the Kaizoku |
|---|
Linda chapter 1 . 5/12/2019 Name: Stitch Nickname : The Puppeteer Age: About 20 to 25 Race: Human Weapons: Short daggers hidden under his sleeves and needles of all kind (Long or short). He uses a strange technique called SEW where he uses his strings to immobilize his opponents part making it seem as if they were sewed up. Powers: He ate the Shiro-Shiro no mi that allows him to swap white things be it cotton or be it paints into things what he desired. It has a certain limitation that the things cannot be tainted with black in order to be swapped. He can create puppets and even a town if he liked with his powers. His puppets look as if like a human beings and can function like one except that they need to be trained at first. He can swap white things into medicine, ships, clothes too. Literally every white things can be swapped for anything except for living people and sea water. Position: The tailor, designer and the puppet entertainer. Personality: He has come to become a white freak due to his powers but not considering his tendencies he is a charming person with a hair full of whites. The melanism in his body stopped getting produced at the early age of 14. Background: He was from an adventurous family in the south blue and during his travel he ate the shiro shiro no mi which made him a Albino Human. His background is that of a well off one but less that of the world nobles. He could eat three times a day and entertain himself so he has good background. Dream: He dreams of that becoming a world renowned person for his clothes and puppets. Likes: Smart people, cotton candy, white things. Dislikes: Taint |
Nakama chapter 1 . 7/28/2018 People place way too much focus on 'nakama' when writing fanfiction for one piece. |
ghostotter chapter 18 . 5/16/2011 wow, it have been a while. it's good seeing this is still running. anyways, nice chapter. a little preview for the next arch and all, can hardly wait to see how it will unfold. and yay, thanks for using my character, i might have a few new things to add to him, later. (cause of rereading notes of after a long time.) well, catch ya later. P |
Mavrik Zero chapter 18 . 5/6/2011 great update bit short but glad to see this is still alive. can't wait to see an update. |
Draketh chapter 18 . 5/5/2011 Finnaly something and its alive! Wow, loved the chapter and though a bit short it did give a good introduction for what its to come and cannot wait to have more! Nice chapter and waiting for more! |
Dthehalfdragon chapter 18 . 5/5/2011 Nice chapter. I cant wait to see the next one. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2011 2DarkIncubisKing 6/12/2010 ch1 Well i hope u can fit my oc in there somewhere Name: Elena or sage whatever name u like better :) Age: 17 or 18 Race:human Weapons/Powers: her weapons are two daggars and two guns thats she carries around and hide it in her outfit she also ate a devil fruit that gives her the ability to heal herselfand people Position: You choose i dont care but maybe nurse or something Personality: Shes very carefree and childish like luffy she loves money and gets along with everyone shes fun to be around and will kill u if u hurt her friends or touch her money seriously shes also very innocent lime if u are mad at her u cant stay mad for long bcuz shes so... Innocent hahaa and shes very kind Apearance: she has straight dark brown hair that goes to mid back and sky blue eyes her skin is kinda tan its normal skin color she wears shirts like namis but she hates skirts so she wears shorts or capriis most of the time Dream: Have all the money in the world and u can think of somethin :) Likes/Dislikes: She likes everything really she only hates it when people hurt her friends and touches her money |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2011 2DarkIncubisKing 6/12/2010 ch1 Well i hope u can fit my oc in there somewhere Name: Elena or sage whatever name u like better :) Age: 17 or 18 Race:human Weapons/Powers: her weapons are two daggars and two guns thats she carries around and hide it in her outfit she also ate a devil fruit that gives her the ability to heal herselfand people Position: You choose i dont care but maybe nurse or something Personality: Shes very carefree and childish like luffy she loves money and gets along with everyone shes fun to be around and will kill u if u hurt her friends or touch her money seriously shes also very innocent lime if u are mad at her u cant stay mad for long bcuz shes so... Innocent hahaa and shes very kind Apearance: she has straight dark brown hair that goes to mid back and sky blue eyes her skin is kinda tan its normal skin color she wears shirts like namis but she hates skirts so she wears shorts or capriis most of the time Dream: Have all the money in the world and u can think of somethin :) Likes/Dislikes: She likes everything really she only hates it when people hurt her friends and touches her money |
Pie Badger chapter 17 . 1/9/2011 Are you still accepting characters? If so: Name: Ridgel 'The Cutlass' (dislikes his nickname) Age: 23 Race: Human. Grungy, yellow-eyed, and has zero tolerance for the cold, Weapons/Powers: He is chained to the cursed weapon 'Bloodie', which is a pair of deadly sharp blades that, when retracted, are completely hidden by his sleeves. When extended, they protrude from the underside of his sleeves, beneath his hands. Bloodie inflicts wounds that are deep and heal slowly, and the blades drink any blood spilled on it. If the swords aren't 'fed', they keep Ridgel up at night with headaches and general illness. Given Ridgel dislikes combat, this means most of the time normal people are sleeping, Ridgel is kept awake in an unpleasant manner. He's a very talented fighter, prioritizing speed and using his surroundings, but almost never dodges and tends to take even very nasty hits head-on because “Dodging is too annoying…” Position: Any available (whatever works for the plot) Personality: It's something of an enigma that Ridgel, while being both strong and intelligent, seems to find his place on the bottom rung of the metaphorical ladder wherever he goes. The main reason is that Bloodie, being a cursed weapon, is only interested in getting as much blood as possible and jerks Ridgel's emotions around like a puppet on a string to achieve that end. Unable to remove the blades, Ridgel has resorted to the next best thing- he doesn't let himself care. About anything. Apathetic and indifferent to everything, not to mention half-asleep most of the time and unwilling to exert more energy than necessary, you'd be excused for mistaking Ridgel for dead, as he's in the habit of falling asleep standing up, in broad daylight, as it's the only time he can catch up on lost sleep. He very rarely will develop an interest in someone and can be a very loyal, if sarcastic, follower. He hates nothing more than people who abuse the weak, and blatant shows of this behavior in his presence are one of the few things that can pierce his apathy and get him angry... which is bad, as once he lets loose with an emotion, Bloodie manipulates it and sends him into a berserk fury in which he'll attack anything that gets in his way; everything stops existing, except for his opponent. Background Story: An orphan for as long as he can remember, Ridgel can't honestly remember where Bloodie got attached to him, and honestly doesn't care. He wandered for most of his youth, until he picked a fight with a corrupt Marine over custody of an orphan girl and was branded a dangerous criminal (well, he wasn't so good at control back then, so... things got messy. The guy survived at least) and rumors began being spread that Ridgel murdered his own family. As he has nothing to disprove it, he's come to believe it after a time, and tends to consider himself a loose cannon. He doesn’t hate himself, just dislikes forming connections with people, deeming them ‘too fragile’. Dream: "Huh... it'd be nice to have a dream..." Likes/Dislikes: LIKES: Quiet places, heights (Will invariably be sitting on the mast or somewhere equally tall), being alone. DISLIKES: Talking about himself (If asked, he will almost always say “I’m too boring to talk about.”) (And I'll put a description in here too) Ridgel is taller than most people, dark-skinned, with yellow eyes and wiry of build. He always looks slightly ill because of the large amounts of scars on his torso, not to mention the clear signs of insomnia. He wears a tattered black longcoat and no shirt whatsoever, simple black pants, and goes barefoot. |
DarkIncubisKing chapter 1 . 6/12/2010 You know I never actually submitted my OC .' Well here she is Name: Akako Takado Age: 24 Race: Human Weapons/Powers: No powers, but carries around a small dagger for protection and practice. And constantly carries a satchel on her person (Had medical training for her friend). Position: Inn Keeper Personality: A slightly bitter and vindictive woman from being abandoned by her fiancée for another woman, with a kind affinity towards animals or any kind of canine. She also loves to try and make new recipes based upon some of the most popular around the world, Akako can often be seen giving random strangers foods to see their opinion of it Apperance: Messy Mid- Shoulder blade length Brown hair with bangs that look like they have been dipped in red paint tied in a ponytail, Forest Green Eyes and soft pink lips with a generous amount of cleavage, A black long skirt with slits going along the sides and green bicycle shorts under them, White short Shirt with puffy sleeves that shows a little bit of cleavage. And high heals. Dream: To find the perfect man and eventually have a five star hotel Likes/Dislikes: Likes small animals, good food and handsome men. Dislikes men who cant keep promises, cowards, and generally ** who try to run out of her inn without paying. |
breadbutterpudding chapter 17 . 5/18/2010 oh wow, a new arc appeared whilst I was away~ awesome And btw the violin-player just rocks, I mean,HER FEET. You can't get any cooler than that (I'm a violin player too!) |
hangman1 chapter 17 . 3/31/2010 Great chapter man! I love how the plot's thickening! |
Dthehalfdragon chapter 17 . 3/31/2010 Nice chapter. I cant wait to see the next one. |
Bigby the Big Bad Wolf chapter 17 . 3/31/2010 Awesome chapter. I can't wait for more. |
Draketh chapter 17 . 3/31/2010 Again loved the story but yes it was a tab bit too short! But still the information revealed was well done and excellently well applied, hope I could see more but indeed if the chapter went longer too much information would have been revealed. But well done! |