You are cruel why you play with my heart I want them together

this is such a great story, heartbreaking at the end, you left me in tears :(

THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!

Awesome story this is the 3rd time I've read it!

Oh this was just beautiful! Beautiful and sad! Really, really sad in fact. Heartbreaking! Reminded me a little bit of some House M.D. episodes (shouldn't be that surprised, considering it is House as Dr. C)
I would definitely go for a sequel. Your writing style is so clear and wraps things up nicely! Keep up the great work!

This was a very well-written story. The end was so touching...*tear tear*

Keep on writing dude!

Aw, I could cry at the end. Keep writing, this is great!

I'd certainly be interested in a sequel. Though your chapters are short, they're well-written and well-characterized and the story flows along believably. How about I put you on author watch, just in case?

Definatly write a sequel. That would be great. You should have made Susan kiss Dr. C at the end instead of hugging him.

I KNOW A GENIUS THAT DOESN'T HAVE TO SLEEP! L FROM DEATHNOTE! AND BB. (also from deathnote)

I loved this story. Dr. Cockroach wanting to help Susan, to make her happy, despite the fact that her bcoming normal and leaving will make him sad is incredibly sweet. It's the best kind of heartache, for a reader. :-)

Very smoothly written, too, which is always an extra pleasure! Thank you for sharing.

Me thinks the reason good old Dr. C can't decide to be happy or sad for susan is because he has fallen head over antenna for her

i saw this movie yesterday, and actually really liked it. and i really liked this story! it was very real, i could see every line. can't wait to read your sequals!

I can't spell.

*face palms*

I made a SERIOUS spelling screw up in the other review...

It should have said this..

*punches air with happines*

YES! There must be a sequal. Please let there be a sequal!

I LOVED this story, and I thought it was so cute how Dr. Cockroach reacts to Susan hugging him around the neck. It was so sweet!

As you can probably tell, I'm a MAJOR CKROACH FAN!

And Susan and Dr. C make a really cute pair!

(If you'r wondering what the spelling error was it was CKROACH' I put a J in there

I pressed the wrong button...

*punches air with happines*

YES! There must be a sequal. Please let there be a sequal!

I LOVED this story, and I thought it was so cute how Dr. Cockroach reacts to Susan hugging him around the neck. It was so sweet!

As you can probably tell, I'm a MAJOR CJROACH FAN!

And Susan and Dr. C make a really cute pair!