Reviews for This Kiss |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love to see different views of this scene, and I like yours. Thanks for O.S. Moon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() d'awwww so cute :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's like a bittersweet moment...? Idk i just loved it ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so good. I've always wanted to know what was going through Alec's mind when he kissed mangus! |
![]() ![]() Very good, I enjoyed this! When I first read this book, I was very shocked and my immediate thoughts went right to what Alec must've been thinking in that moment. I think you captured those emotions very nicely, though personally, I'd rephrase "But, standing in front of the warlock who had told Alec he had loved him" right after that I'd erase the "the thought" part. It makes a little more sense and still retains the point of the sentence. Otherwise, I think you did a wonderful job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you got it just right! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Squee* I FRICKIN' LOVED THIS SCENE OH MY GOD I LOVED THIS PART! Sorry, major fangirl moment over. Very good. I think the fangirl moment says it all. ~carrie~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! yes! they are perfect for each other! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how there is no conversation in this. In the many (many, many, many) other fics of this scene there is always somesort of conversation, I enjoy how it seems like words aren't needed at all. This is pure great-ness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW, that's so cute. I was soo happy that Alec and Magnus, too, finally go their happy ending. They're just adorable together. This was really well written. You should by all means write more. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() All I can say is 'aw' Alec's so adorable. It's terrific for your first MI Fanfic. ahaha Fave |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Throws arms up* WOOT! that was great. lol keep up the good work. |