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Stories excellence my only hang-up with the author's work was that I just wish you gave a warning when he was about to do a lemon or lime I'm truly sad for the loss of your friend but I remember something I intend to speak at funerals next time I go to one the truth said is no loss of person is not lost it self but the loss of all the memories to be made because no new memories can be made with them but a person has never truly gone from this world until all those that know him and knew of him are gone as well only then did someone truly pass from this world I would hope you would try to finish your friends story I can see it's not been updated since 2011 so I might suggest that you put it up for adoption to another author with the stipulation that they put some kind of memorial for the man at the end of the story well I've never been for a romance I don't float that way this was truly the first one I willingly read only because I read the first two parts my honest opinion of it while blunt is it's your own damn business why the hell should I care Basin meaning I got no problem with it I'm more of a believe in love if you truly love someone and what's the problem I'm a Believer in heaven and hell I'm almost of the bible say that if you are gay you will go to hell I can only hope that the way the world has changed since those rules were written that maybe the good Lord has changed as well because it for as many people like that I've met not a single one has ever been evil maybe in some of the nicest people I've ever met but if that's still the case I also believe in damnation by choice if you made your choice then no one can never stand it in front of you Fort all you can do is speak your peace to the person and let them make their own choice I hope your friend rest in peace and knows so many people enjoyed his work.

EEWW i hate yaoi

This Note hit me like a boulder to my heart. For I have loved this story since the moment I found it, and yes I mean the two past ones that this story is a sequel to as well. I will mourn not only the departure of the author but also the likely departure of this story as well, for death comes when it comes and the lad was cut down so young. But, I find this story now, in the future, long after Paradox has gone to his sweet goodnight and find that his work has remained long after him, this is cold comfort but comfort nonetheless that even if he is gone, his spirit will live forever in this story and all that he touched with his mastery during his lifetime. For he just like Minato imbued a piece of his very soul into each of his works. Let us be comforted in this, that though he may be gone, his love for his readers shall live on forever even after my children's children have their own young. May you rest Living Paradox, my sweet sleeping King of Bijuu.

This website is call fanfiction so people can write anything they want for there story. If you don't like then don't read it. You do know that this person is dead right.

Serioulsy I will never understand people whom write a story where a MALE CHARACTER give birth, do you know that the only male animal in the world whom can do that is a sea horse, do Naruto looks like a sea horse for you ?

Seriously people whom write this shit of story need to stop and start using your brain.

Only female woman can give birth because they have the right condition for that unlike male.

I have only been reading these books for a few days but they were well written and thought out. I am saddened of the news of his passing and at such a young age. Continuing to write may be a good thing but others may believe cpntinuing will taint his memory

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I was so shocked when I read this.I have never met this person but at the news if their death I am crying for the first time in was an incredibly skilled writer and never let his/her readers down with his/her updates,I am so upset that this happened to a passionate person with so much potential.
My deepest condolences,
Sebastian Gallagher

So Naruto GAVE BIRTH?! How fucked up is that

Paradox will be greatly missed, his stories were amazingly written and were full of passion. Why must all the good writers die?

I was completely shocked when i read this, it was so unexpected and super unfortunate, RIP his stories will be missed.

,so sad,i would like to see what you could do

I'm sorry for your loss even if it's too late to say it. I loved this guy fanfic and i found them a very sweet and philosophical material.
My only regret is to not have sent a rewiev to paradox when he was writing "the cries of a lone wolf", and now 25/07/2013 i found that he is dead and at the age of 17. You know? Life sucks sometimes, and this is one of that times.
Anyways you said that you, maybe, will continue his works... well then i wish you the better of the lucks.
Sincerely.
Kankuro Cifer

wow... I will read all of your stories! R.I.P AND YOUR FANFICTIONS SHALL BE REMEMBERED!