Reviews for The First Time
realchemistry chapter 18 . 11/8/2009
Love all their firsts, lovely moments :D
Korydwen chapter 18 . 9/5/2009
ohh i enjoyed reading those little moments between them! they're very sweet together and you imagined so well thoses missing moments.
Korydwen chapter 3 . 9/5/2009
i really enjoy those moments! i miss them in the show and you translate very well their feelings, their personality and the essence of their relationship )
Jac Danvers chapter 18 . 8/27/2009
This chapter was so sweet! Can't wait to read more!
Marla's Lost chapter 18 . 8/14/2009
Bravo! Excellent! I could not stop reading from the first "First Time" to the last "First Time" so romantic and so in character with all of their strengths and flaws exposed.

Beautifully executed!
Aurora1020 chapter 18 . 8/11/2009
That was so romantic and rather sexy too without being overly done! I so love these glimpses into their relationship. I love all the first times you have chosen to write about! I hope that there is more to come :)
makealist chapter 18 . 8/10/2009
"They spent the rest of the evening eating junk food and laughing at the Dharma labels on all the packages in their house."

Yes! This is totally what they would do if they were high. What normal person wouldn't, actually? This image makes me laugh, laugh, laugh - and I'm not high.
onetreefan chapter 18 . 8/10/2009
so so good! :) i can't wait for more
CarolynneRuth chapter 18 . 8/10/2009
Great chapter! Loved the red rose bit, James rushing to see Juliet when he'd heard she was hurt, the dinner and the way too sexy but fun to read, mushy scene.
Jennay chapter 18 . 8/9/2009
Aww. I loved that. Very adorable. Perfect. :]

Can't wait for the next.

PS. YOU KICK ASS. The whole bit about smoking weed, absolutely brill! :D
geminiebo chapter 18 . 8/9/2009
LMFAO at them getting high and the munchies in the 70s. They must have smoked A LOT to think the Dharma labels were funny. Hilarious! I can totally imagine this scene on screen.

Their date was so beautiful and pretty HOT. I like James being like this. He's so nice to her and she deserves it just like he deserves having someone love him for him. You really captured what Valentine's Day is really about with this fic. Wonderful job as usual. :)
Lovin Suliet chapter 18 . 8/9/2009
Awesome, Great job! Love this story :)
Wolf's Edge chapter 18 . 8/9/2009
This is so good. Can I make a request? I would really like to see the first time he gets sick and she takes care of him. :P It would be cute because it would force her to come out of "retirement" just for him. :P
im so lost chapter 17 . 7/22/2009
That was really cute. :]

Loved it!

Can't wait for V-Day.
CarolynneRuth chapter 17 . 7/21/2009
Now that I've thrown several buckets of cold water over my head I shall proceed. Loved this! I was like gobsmacked (not sure if I spelt that right) and trying not to fall off my chair and draw lovehearts in the dust on the floor. Very sexy and I'm not complaining at all. It was beautifully written and I was totally impressed.
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