Love! I can't wait until I read the sequel! Keep up the great work!

i glad i read it. this was a good story. no lemons, but that's okay. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

Oh wow! You go Kagome! Really love how she told kikyo off in this chapter.

This story was fantastic. I understood the torrent of emotions and why it took Kagome a long time to heal. I hope that there is a sequel. There were a few grammatical errors and typos, but overall it was an excellent read. Thank you!

I am on another re-read...

I must say that it is a really good story.

though I wonder did you age rin or did you keep her 8 years old because Sesshomaru took her in at the age of 8/9 and if a total of 4 years have past then she would be 12/13 the same age as Souta, Kohaku was 11 at the time of the anime, Shippo was 54/57 during the anime but was about 7 in human I did loads of research on him to get this right Shippo would age much slower than rin she would be long dead before he matured enough to mate maybe in another 100 years or so making him almost 160
InuYasha is technically 200 though he spent 50 years sleeping bringing his mental age down. he appears to be about 15 young but mateable
Sesshomaru is the oldest of the group at being 500 though only looking 19... and speaking of Sesshomaru where is his proper sword he would have gotten it and is arm back... if Kagome's powers were unsealed for her to be able to use them the way that she is...

I have read your story before, but this time I feel I need to say something... though I really do like your story...

now then... what is the difference between killing a youkai and a human? nothing evil is evil no matter the race... if one can kill youkai then they can kill humans just as well without tainting themselves your view is prejudiced...

just because one is human does not make them better than the other it is like saying whites are better then blacks and I was raised not to see the color of ones skin, but by ones actions and if one acts evil...

the way you have written this basically tells the reader that no matter the youkai whether innocent (child or innocent adult or even evil youaki) that all youkai are bad and need to be killed... look at the whole... not narrow minded... humans are far more evil than any youkai... look into history and you will see...

how's squishy?

i love the shrinking cloud...lol

awww...squishy...lol

i like your story. inuyasha is an idiot!

So I read all the way to i think chapter 15 and then backed out. I wasn't going to say anything because I usually don't. But I had to tell u why. This story has amazing potential. U have amazing potential as a writer. U have great focus in details and vision of the story. But it just needs a little work. On the long haul. U can't expect someone to be so tore up over a friends betrayal that she completely shut herself down to her family included. Its not realistic and to be honest its pretty childish. The whole story is written as if its for a child. Not a mature adult. But ur story itself could be amazing. I'm sorry. I hope u understand. And this is not a flame. I just wanted u to know that the story is very good. Just needs more work to fit into the mature category.

So why cant inuyasha tell that kikyo is being decietful? Is he just blindly trusting her?

Amazing!

When you can't differtiate M rating to T rating. Seriously, the rating on this is WAAAAY off. I've read some serious shit that had M ratings and this is literally a fairytale story compared to them (-_-") Well whatever then, got pretty boring for me, mostly just prolonged it with some areas that I literally skipped them just to get this story over and done with.

When you can't differentiate between to and too...

Inuyasha's stupidity makes my brain hurt

I'm actually crying with how this went. To be honest, really believable how she forgave, but said that she would never forget and couldn't really trust her friends. But she definitely developed as a character and I have to say 11/10 stars