So beautifully sad. Wonderfully written and u think you succeeded. Just, ugh, the emotions and my chest feels so heavy after reading - but something I love this heavy stuff. Great job

I felt painful all the time I read but in a good way. You did it great. Amazing piece of work. By the way, it still left my tear until now. oh my god.

I loooove. Thank you for this!

Oh shit. I cried. Now that was unexpected...

i kept crying as i read this
it’s so damn hard to hold tears whilst reading this

I am in denial and even though youre the author of this lovely story, i will still deny that one of them died and left the other alone! Why would you do this!

But anyway awesome story and writing, thank you :)

OMG! I can't even convey with words how much I love this story. The feels, man!

You totally made me cry. You can feel the pain and his absolute resolution at the end.

Thanks for writing this.

amazingly written. love it.

Wow. Hard-hitting, yeah. That was great. Horribly saddening, but great. Thank you!

This was the first fanfic that actually moved me to tears. I just want to thank you for the wonderful experience that you have given me by writing such a poignantly beautiful piece. Shikamaru's characterization was on point and tragic, Temari's short appearance wrenched my heart out, and the way you're story unfolded was like magic. Although it's been a very long time since you've written this piece, I just feel like I should let you know how much your work has affected me and how it has encouraged me to start writing out my own fictions too. Amazing work!

this was so beautiful and yet so tragic. the ending was PERFECT. Well done 3 this is one of my all time favorite fics

*Sob*

i cried so much like omg! beautifully tragic

Despite being horribly tragic and depressing, this is one of my favorite stories on .

It's good. It's really, really, REALLY good. I like how you described what's going on in his head