wao, Jessica sounds decent. some docs made look very horrible

Good story

Ok please get over the angst. This is not tagged angst. And they both must have flunked classes on magical creatures to still not piece it together.

I really loved this story. It was very wholesome and beautiful. It’s sad that Edward will eventually die, but I also understand it. Being a vampire truly wasn’t something he’d ever really wanted. Just knowing that the pair of them will live happy for the duration of their remaining life is good enough, I think.

Emmet seemed so disappointed. So so sad. Lol

Great story

Aw Loved it

Well done!

This was fantastic

Damn! I wanted to read some smut! Do you write any later on? I hope so.

I have only read chapter one, but already I quite like your writing style. the conversation is natural and so far it is edited beautifully. Normally I wouldn't have reviewed until I get more into the meat of the story, but I have been inspired by the inelegant harpy who commented before me. Whomever they are are a disgrace to the concept of fan fiction, the English language and humanity. Don't worry about trolls. Creativity cannot exist in a mind so obviously small, therefore they are limited to spite. I commend you on your beginning and am looking forward to finishing. Keep writing.

You’re now ramping up needless drama and half your chapters are pointless to the plot. I tried to stick this out but all your characters are retarded which can only mean the author is retarded.

Seriously the day after someone he’s known for years is killed he’s out celebrating? Your fucking stupid.

This whole story is one fucked up train wreck after another. Where is any happiness? Or are you just going to be another sick twisted author who likes to have their characters go through constant suffering? Wonder if you should live in a psych ward because that’s pretty fucked up

Author has proven themselves fucking retarded. Going to non important classes that you are going to as part of a damned vacation are not more fucking important than discovering the attack and doing something about it. So far the guards have proven to be useless as they don’t do anything. They just let this slide? Stupid reasoning and too hard to swallow. Try again moron!