Sentimental is good. I’m truly enjoying this series! I’m now off to read the next installment!

My favorite of your writing so far. Love the reverse singularity scapel.

Ianto has the worst bloody luck...

o0o0 torchwoods version of the Prophecy...!

Damn I loved that movie..? BUT I am weird and thiks christopher walken is kickin..?

what you should do is combine all chapters together and make one huge BOOK so to speak...place em all in order..!

other than that this is so GOOD

Very nice sequel. I like that Ianto got to have an angel possess him for a change. Hopefully all those positive emotions can counteract the evil thoughts that were present earlier.

I like that you had them keep Elliot. It was refreshing that you didn't simply have them accept him. Ianto refusal to keep the child was a normal reaction, and anything different would have been unbelievable.

I am happy that you are writing a third story to this series. It will be nice to see our boys "playing house". I just hope it isn't TOO sweet and mushy. They come off as so unrealistic when their characters are written that way.

Another excellent job...thanks!

Esc.

Been so busy, but just got to read chapter 14, what can i say.

Great begining, middle & ending. I loved it, keep up the great work you are very talented. Good luck with your Exams

I couldn't leave previous comments because I hadn't read Fallen Angel *blushes :(* but yesterday I read the nine previous ones and these 14 new ones, kinda of devouring them! OMG one of the best stories by far, i suffered through all the chapters but finally I knew Jack would find the way to convince Ianto about the baby and their life together! Congrats and looking forward to reading more soon.

"He burped, is that normal?" that would be a really Jack-like thing to say. But it fits Ianto too.

I love your stories. Unclean Spirit was one of the best fanfiction reads for me in months. Thank you!

Lots of love,

Sara

Aw! My God I am such a sucker for babies. So so so happy that Ianto accepted him. Loved this story, will await the next with great anticipation.

Good luck with your finals!

Gx

No, you won't hand in the wrong document by mistake. Your final thesis will be around 300 words long and entirely identifiable from your Torchwood stories by the way it covers only one third of a piece of paper... as opposed to being a small novella!

Can one use the excuse "an alien ate my homework"?

Fun story this one, though I am never too sure about Jack/Ianto with kids. I wonder whether Elliot, like all children, will turn out to be the spawn of the devil...

Aww, that was so cute :D I was reading from the beginning today and i didn't want to stop untuil now to review but this was an ace story! Loved it! Yaay, im glad that you are writing another story in this series!

xox

I just tipped Cornflakes all over my keyboard as I got to the bit where Owen breaks a rib. That's a BAD thing to do to Owen! Have had to cast supper aside in deference to the end of this chapter and the survival of both Owen and my PC.

brilliant! i really like this. _

Aw, lovely. Nothing can ever be too sentimental when it's Janto! I'm so glad they got to raise Elliot.

Very much looking forward to the final story - this is a great series.

Thanks for another treat :)

Grey

Yay! Doing a happy dance...Jack and Ianto raising Elliot! Awesome! Great story...and a decent sappy Janto ending...let the sap run! You can make syrup out of it! Can't wait for the wrap up.

Darque