Soo, i read the first chapter! Cant wait to read the next one! This can only get better, and i mean it in a positive way!

You shouldn't erase it. Keep it up. Maybe someone someday will pick it up and finish it.

Please don't take it down! I've enjoyed reading it and I'm sad to hear it won't be updated, but I'd love for you to at least leave it up. :( Please.

This was a good chapter!

Good! Cute name Windmane for the Link's horse!

I'm going to start by saying this looked interesting, but the NAMES you picked for people are, well... to me, they just feel so WRONG. I mean, 'Nalon' and 'Dalon'? To me that just seems like you picked two names that were just barely different from 'Malon' and 'Talon'. IMHO, that is one of the worst ways to pick names.

I will admit that, aside from the names so far, this story looks like something I'd enjoy reading.

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(Sorry if this review comes across as offensive, I'm just a *little* too good at being rather blunt.)

Another great chapter. Honestly I forgot all about Celia... Good thing I came back to read it!

Man... It's really an amazing story

Nice chapter of course. I can't believe I was so ignorant back then... But yea. I'll continue reading and reviewing!

Hmm if I didn't know any better, I'd think this was one crazy love triangle! I love this story

I got a shout out in this chapter lol... It's amazing to realize how long I have been following this story... Makes me think of my high school years... Anyways... Back to reading!

Hey kerian, remember me? I am just a huge fan of this story. Since it hasn't been updated in over a year, I decided to reread it. It still feels as good as the firs time I read it!

Good writing so far I enjoy reading it, But I feel your explaining too much and it feels too much like OoT, I am going too try too finish the whole story though :D -Mott100 because I'm too lazy too log in

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