Good story

I feel like the lack of Bella's human memories is sort of a cop out. I would think such important memories as being hunted by James, Victoria, Laurant, times with Jake, when he first phased, her birthday party would all be memories she would remember. Going by your comments that she hardly remembers her human life then she shouldn't be able to remember Mike Newton and thus shouldn't be able to joke about it. There seems to be conflicting moments in the story were remarks are made that indicate remembrance and yet there are several scenes were you indicate that she can't remember major events. Seems sort of contradictory.

You should definitely write about the other wolves and their imprints

Love it and would love it if you could write and the other wolf and their imprint relationship story? Quil and Claire, Seth and Jade, Kim and Jared, Rachel and Paul, Embry and Maia ( from what I've read so far it's quite a tale) And all these stories are ones I'd love to read!

I love how you've written this Jake and Nessie story could you please maybe also write about the other wolves and their imprints too?

Yes Ness what did you wish for? ;)

It was goooooood

well, I enjoyed it. I confess you say their names way too much, though. I'll probably read it again, however.

Vital, you say? Gee, I wonder what it is? (Fun fact: that was sarcasm)

Amazing! What a great way to end it:)

This was an amazing story! And it wasnt too short, too long, too angst ridden or fluffy.

You did a beautiful job of this and I loved reading it! Their story was everything it should be and was a real treat, too!

Boy! I never thought Jake was that damn slow witted! I guess the gears just didn't want to shift right away! Hope he's got the message now that even her parents have given him a push!

That's pretty heartbreaking, vampire, human, hybrid or wolf, makes no difference! Daddys hold their baby girls when their hearts break, no matter what!I really think Jake needs to adjust his thinking, or he's going to lose his chance with Ness!

Well, at least one of them has begun to admit what's going on, emotionally. Now if we could just coordinate Ness and Jake's feelings, and calm Edward, it might help!