Reviews for Black Eyed Angel
petmom1213 chapter 44 . 9/7/2019
Oh my gosh, I love love love this story. I was so good and well written. And a very unusual concept. It was amazing.
Thank you so much for writing.
Mickey Hall
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 30 . 4/26/2019
You described Edward's years drinking human blood all wrong. Like it was an accident, which it most definitely was not. Also, they certainly didn't drive through the south of France after crossing the English channel. Details like the are important and really not hard to look up.
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 27 . 4/26/2019
So did you forget about Irina's existence? You didn't mention her at all and she's part of the Denali coven.
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 17 . 4/25/2019
I don't understand how Jasper shed a tear since vampires can't cry...
TrillionSchiffer chapter 28 . 4/22/2018
Okay... a manipulator. That explains crazy lady.

Still... What a passive fight. Real weak just laying there taking bite mark after bite mark. That shit scars ya know. What a dummy.

So they hear a manipulator is in range and decide to Run? Leave the Denalis alone with the issue?

Selfish much? I thought you were suppose to be family. Not whe n it comes to trouble huh?
TrillionSchiffer chapter 26 . 4/22/2018
This is so 'vanilla' ...
TrillionSchiffer chapter 25 . 4/22/2018
Man... the Cullens really come off as weak here. So damn 'Pet' as passive/permissive. Its a wonder they didn't go to the meeting pantless and bent over. No backbone.

"Peace, Peace , Peace, Peace." Please don't hurt us" We're good vamps" Please let us be."

Pretty sad.
PuzzlePerfect9 chapter 45 . 1/26/2018
this was such an interesting story. it was rec'd on one of the facebook groups and im so glad I read it. i loved the gift and the fight with volturi, but especially loved how bella was able to give back humanity. i was kind of surprised no one else wanted it, but at the same time not. sad its over.
Lillywhite1 chapter 45 . 7/17/2017
thanks very much for this wonderful and truly inspired story. I enjoyed it .
orchidluv chapter 1 . 6/6/2017
I loved it. So great!
orchidluv chapter 42 . 6/5/2017
Im not sure if you write your love scenes that way on purpose, or if ffnet made you do it, or what, but its so beautiful. Every scene between them is full of love, sensuality, fascination. Its not smut. Its love. Such a great job!
orchidluv chapter 42 . 6/5/2017
Haha Carlisle's oh so subtle hint about napping...
orchidluv chapter 38 . 6/5/2017
Siobhan is definitely a female.
orchidluv chapter 35 . 6/5/2017
Gasp! Edward swore! lol
orchidluv chapter 33 . 6/5/2017
Loved that so much!
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