Wow! I'm usually not a fan of these type of stories but the writing was so well done! Loved it! :)

Evil alarm clock ruined everything

Did you have to end it so anticlimactically? I still love your stuff though ]

The first thing I thought when I got to the end was 'Go to hell' then the next was 'F* you' but then I realised how ironic that was, haha ;)

Great writing, sexy and suspenseful but you kept.. an undertone of humour all the way through. Loved it!

Dear goopaash!(