It is nice that for once (!), Paul is NOT the pack hothead! That "Run, Bambi, run!" line was Priceless .

It’s been close to ten years since I’ve read this, yet it’s of a handful I remembered. Though vague recollections, the few titles in ye old memory banks, were amazingly well written whether canon or non, portrayed the outline of the characters similarly but with variation. I’ve been out of the Twihole until fate and a pandemic made me pick up Meyers book...and here I am making the rabbit hole round. Can’t wait to revisit this story. Thank you for the story. Like others, I’m sure, I hope you also fall down the Twihole to be inspired enough to continue with these characters.

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More please

More please.

I looked at the dates in the header and realized that it had been a really long time since you were able to post. I hope you will be able to again soon as I really love this story and would love to have more of it. It is pretty unique and very interesting. I hope life is treating you well and that you know what a good writer you are. Best wishes, Sue.

I really don't like how arrogant Edward is. It seems so undeserved too. Like, what does he have to be arrogant about? Hes not even a man.

Please continue I love it it’s amazing!

Well damn !

every chapter is the fucking same. Edward wants to fuck bella...but instead he just molests her and acts like a douche bag. And bella acts like the easy whore she is. same thing every chapter...over and over and over again.

why is Edward reading that book then? doesn't seem like something he would want to read since hes subjected to those kind of thoughts all the time.

Why is he so arrogant? Hes a virgin but he thinks he will be the ultimate lover? Ya I really fucking doubt that. Honestly he just comes off as a douche. And bella is a total whore. And just like all the other girls apparently, sitting there panting like a damn dog.

That comment Edward made? I'm the dragon? LOL hes a stupid 17 year old boy! a dragon...LOL Edward? Mr I grew up with two loving rich parents? Mr I live with my new rich mommy and daddy? Mr eternal highschool? That kid is so far from being "the dragon" its not even funny!

Jasper? He might be the dragon. But not Edward...never Edward.

Oh, do i love dark Edward! Seeing his thoughts written down like that gave a whole new light to him, and my god is it hot! Im supposed to make dinner now... i think not! I'll continue this fantastic story instead! Pizza for the fam instead! Haha.

Loving naughty Edward and super curious how things would have gone down... would Edward ha e turned her on purpose? Would it have been an accident? Would she survive? Would they have sex before all that? So many juicy questions :)

So Tanya was his first kiss? Yuck...