This was absolutely awesome. It made me laugh so hard. And what is even better is that I can actually see it happening. Poor sweet Bluestreak is definitely scarred for life. He probably had no idea what came over the normally calm and stoic Prowl.

Oh that was cute the last line was priceless

Ah, it's always the young one who gets scarred. Poor poor Bluestreak. Very nice story. Ha! Prowl just can't restrain himself...well, at least now we know that he IS a emotional and normal-functioning mech. :P

~KW

Best ending line...ever. LOL!

Loved the story.

*laughs* So cute!

This is error-free, lighthearted cotton candy fluff indeed. I quite like how you went about this. It’s different from the norm; similar to my standpoints about (real-life or fictional) relationships. Or, comparable to how I would write a romantic plot. As much as people try to suppress or end up feeling guilt-ridden by them; jealousy an envy are universal thoughts - that are here to stay. Everyone senses them from time to time. It is all about the matter of management.

Even if they were just friends, Prowl would have a good reason for being bothered by Sideswipe’s actions. He was openly ignoring the saboteur’s cues. Anyway, Prowl must really be devoted to Jazz if his battle computer was almost sent into overdrive. It was sweet that he finally freed himself from the box that he’d painted himself in, even though he’s worried Bluestreak, the twins, and Wheeljack for the rest of their natural lives.

Since their commitment is supposed to be young, I also liked how you stayed clear of any (hinted or visible) physical conduct until the end. People tend to forget that a relationship should be built upon an emotional attachment first. Instead, they jump right into the physical aspects. As you may be able to tell, I don't believe in love at first sight.

*laughs* I do use the word myself, but I can also acknowledge how old-fashioned the word “relations” is in comparison to something like “canoodlin”. *laughs* However, the terms fit like a charm for both Prowl and Jazz.

No one and I mean no one touches what belongs to Prowl. Sunny and Sides will never look at Jazz that way again.

Good story!

*falls over laughing at the twins' reaction, holding their netherbits* That was hilarious! Poor Bluestreak.

mahhahaha love it haha those to are the only couple story i'll read but i loved it :)

hahaha lol LOVE IT *waiting like a lost puppy for more*

Nyahaha! Go Prowl! Underneath that cool exterior is a raving passionate beast just waiting to be let out!

I think I remember reading this sometime way back when on LJ...I still love it!

This is just too funny. I love the fluff!

Certainly made me smile loved it and i definitely loved Jazz's last line about scaring Blue. Nice one!

This was one of the best Prowl/Jazz fanfics I have read it quite some time. I love how you make Jazz kind of.. flow, like moving water even as he goes through his everyday life. Prowl is bloody perfect. Keep up the awesome work!

Brilliant! Yep, direct always works there Prowler )