Great story really beautiful

The ending was perfect. It was like a whisper. Very sweet & very touching. You have every Reason to be proud of your work :3

Nice work :) This was absolutely beautiful.

I like that you are able to integrate the physics-defying, slightly nonsensical anime style into your story without making the all too common mistake of obnoxiously over using it. The unifying theme of "eyes" was a brilliant touch too :P It really brought the story together and demonstrated Raven's progress as she learns to open up herself to others - can you say easy contrast between beginning and end? ;D It makes the effects of Beast Boy's love all the more apparent. hehe...

Very realistic portrayal of all the Titans, but your news article writing could use a little touching up. (So says the former newspaper editor, so don't mind me, I'm just being a nit-pick ;P haha) Very nice, and I'm lovin the romance! haha

I love Green Eyes! More shamless band promotion please~! Coldplay 3!

I love the idea of Raven growing up. It provides a new dimension to her character. Keep up the good work~!

AW! love bbrae :) really good story :)

I love it it is so cute

I know most people symbolize love with red or pink

I always symbolized it with green a calming color because love is a calm almost serene state but at times can be intimate but you must be comfortable with that person to love them. Write more stories and I will read them

I love bbrae

from mii

ok this is intresting

I can't get over how much I love the way you write! I hope to see some more stories from you soon. :D

Wow, this was phenomenal! I liked the whole idea of eyes and how their meaning changed through different parts of her life. Great imagery and dialog and the BB/Raven moment at the end was very cute. Bonus points on that one :-D. Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting to see more!

Another great one shot. I like the way you write.

It's beautiful, and I actually liked how you didn't emphasize the "eye motif" near the end. It had a intrinsic sort of quality to it, more gentle and fitting somehow to Raven and BB's relationship.

I absolutely loved this story. It's really unique and sweet.

Now that was a fun story, and a full circle one too as they told the life of Raven from within eyes she sees in each moment of her life. :D

I congratulate you on this great idea and I encourage you to please keep up the good work upon any great future story that you may come up with. ;)