I adored the squirrel. The scene where he shows up kept me laughing all the way through.

"Sorry I let it out." He seems so unconcerned about it...'What? Oh, yeah, a mouse just jumped out of my mouth. No biggie.' I also liked the part about Marron having better manners then to let mice crawl out of his mouth. Not quite sure why, but that made me laugh. Carrot's reaction to his Inner Child was funny too. And, for some reason, I liked that Carrot's Self Image was made out of plastic. It just seemed to fit perfectly.

Keep writing!

That was so cute! For the most part, it was wonderfully written. Will you write something like this again?

My poor Carrot-chan. Quite a few quotes went into my file from this. The characterization of Carrot is kinda harsh, but not militantly anti-Carrot as I was worried it'd be. The characterization of Marron I disagree with, but accept anyway. As for Gateau, very much IC to my thinking. Ego-maniac AND sweet guy, at the same time. Original and very funny as well. But not really much of an ending, is it? I want to have a bit more of a closure to the end.

Oh my...

I have to say I liked it. I don't think I couldn't like it. And CARROT! Well, I always knew he'd love his little bro, even if he was gay. And Gateu is just TOO cool in this! Make more!

...wow...that was just...wow, that was some very very VERY DEEP writing you got going on there. i loved it, you got the characters just right, even thought you misspelled some of the names...dont take as a flame...nononono i would have to say that this is one of the best fanfics for this anime ive ever really read, you gotta do another chapter...Onegai! *_* MOREMOREMORE (was heard chanting in the back ground of otakus everywhere) SQUirrel ROCKS was also heard being chanted. err..umm..ja ne!

Loved it, loved it, loved it! The dialogue was confusing in some parts, but overall this fic is so amazing. The way you handled all of the character's was great, and the scenes with Carrot and Squirrel were hilarious.

This fic was awesome...I loved it. It's very deep and meaningful...and funny. *blinks* _

*Giggles.* Oh gosh that's hilarious! I just finished and oh my I'll be laughing for a while. Please do a sequel or something... *Finally loses it and falls out of chair laughing to death.*

*sigh* after a whole night of reading this (and some in the moring) I must say you are a very talented writer! SQUIRREL ROCKS! I luv the ending, but must you not tell us what happens to The rest of them? I wanna know! WRITE MORE! OBAEY ME NOW!

Cute, friggen hilarious, and all around luvly. I liked this a lot _ Is it going to be continued? Even if it isn't, this fic is awesome enough as is. The visions were intriguing, you did a great job with Gateau's past, and the whole thing with the squirrel was pure genius. I commend thee for thine brilliance _

I loved it. This was amazing. I...I...I just don't know what else to say, but I'll try. The way you wrote Marron was great, but the way you wrote Carrot and Gateau was amazing. And unprecedented. Few explore the way Carrot thinks and even fewer dig into Gateau. The way the characters interacted with each other was wonderful and...and...this was just great. I really don't know what else to say. Keep writing!