"unnatural? You're a talking sword!" XD

Heheh, cute. What I want to know though, is if in this fanfic, Sonic previously had feelings for the Blaze from his own universe. I thought at first maybe they'd been dating but he shows no feeling of guilt, more like a feeling of satisfaction, so I have to assume that he did in fact have previous desires for Blaze and used this universe as an opportunity to give into them. Ah...medieval wenches are so easy...

Though I suppose that's a little unfair, since I really like Blaze and she certainly is no wench. Anyways, wicked cute fic.

Ok?!
It was GREAT!

LMFAO lovely story both romance and Humor xD love it.

This is great! Not many people does Sonic/Percival too.

Romance to more romance...to a slight bit of comedy at the end. Not bad...Keep up the good work!

~ADarknessInHeaven

aka: Sam

Aww, I think it was cute!

Nice bit of fluff there! Hoping to see more in the future!

Cheers- Force 'Hog

Interesting. I would have liked a bit more description but otherwise, nice work.

WoW. I luv Caliburn. LoL!

Update please.

It's not bad, per se, but it could definitely use some more work. Punctuation, spelling, and a bit of a clunky narrative made it a bit harder to enjoy, but that's not at all my way of saying it was a bad story. has changed since I kinda let my account go idle for a few years, and even before that, people had started treating any indication of what needs work as flaming. I'm just trying to make sure you don't take it the wrong way. One more thing I didn't really care for was Sonic's forwardness. He's not really the kind of guy who'd do something like just kiss a girl out of nowhere. I'd imagine he'd be more concerned with cheering her up to help her get over her defeat. But hey, it's your story, your imagining of the events that occurred, I'm really in no place to criticize, considering some of my own works.

Well, to be honest I really think that you did better than I did with my Sonic/Percival story. Everone was in character, I liked everthing I read. You outdid yourself mate! Oh and I really cant believe I inspired someone to write a story... Oh well! XD Have a good day!

Sincerly,

Johnathon

aka. GGUNDAMFAN34

Very funny at the end. X3

Well, you edited it into your own way. Pretty good one-shot. I'm sure GGUNDAMDAN34 will be very proud with this! The romance was sudden, but I couldn't care less. I would REALLY like to see more Blaze/Sonic one-shots from you. They're pretty good.