Reviews for An American Vampire in Chicago
Bevey99 chapter 23 . 2/15
Really enjoyed this version. Loved the fact you made your vamps more original. Not the same old stuff which sometime I like reading but not over and over. Thank you for writing and sharing. Off to read the next.
entity1127 chapter 23 . 9/15/2019
I enjoyed this FANFICTION one of the best I've read within the last six months. Kudos!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2019
Sorry but NO threesomes!
Guest chapter 23 . 3/21/2019
Fabulous story
Ticcing Bat chapter 23 . 1/17/2019
really enjoyed this. nor sure why I've not read this series before. can't find any new decent vampward these days. I don't read anything other than vamp fics x
TheEasternWind chapter 3 . 2/22/2018
Waaaait. Star Wars the Empire strikes back is one of the WORST of the entire series. Seriously. Do they have any self-respect. Or respect for the Star Wars franchise?

Also, I dare you to name every single movie where Claire de Lune was played. It's one of the most basic pieces ever..
Guest chapter 23 . 1/24/2018
Edwards a gross skank
Guest chapter 16 . 1/24/2018
Edward had a threesome with Tanya and her SISTER? Tanya enjoys incest does she? And THATS ok with Edward? That's...really gross.
And with that, I just lost the last bit of respect I had for edward.

Im going to stop reading this now, cause really? He sounds all used up. And why would a man whore get a virgin like bella? Its so unbalanced. NO THANKS.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/24/2018
I read seven chapters just to find out that Edward fucked the most used up cum dumpster on earth? Tanya? Seriously? NO ONE wants that whores sloppy seconds. And I don't see a mind reader fucking someone that gross, he would know EXACTLY where shes been.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/24/2018
Why so much about music? Do you think that added anything to the story? Because it bored me to death!
Lillywhite1 chapter 22 . 11/22/2017
Wonderful story, thanks for writing this,
Isamuso chapter 23 . 10/22/2017
I thoroughly enjoyed this beginning to your saga. Well done.
Atwiggs chapter 1 . 9/3/2017
I think I read this already!
Jean Driver chapter 23 . 7/2/2017
Interesting take on the Bella and Edward story! Thank you!
lol chapter 16 . 4/14/2017
this version of Edward is pretty gross...why is Edward always a virgin or a complete used up whore? why is there never middle ground?
and Tanya and her SISTER had sex with Edward at the same time? fucking nasty...and Edward doesn't mind getting sexual with guys too? tag teaming girls...or threesomes with men?
ya this dude is not for me! bye
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