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derekctomlinson chapter 1 . 6/3 lol jill smirking at her husband chris redfield mhmm i know what you are thinking about my eyes are up here |
Yaycandy2023 chapter 1 . 2/17/2015 P-p-please continue. I love this story. Where all the guys at the station expect Chris are perverts, and then Chris falls in love with her. Also, a request. Can you do a forest x Jill? Where first is super pervert-y and Jill somehow Jill falls in love with him? Thanks! |
Sepsis chapter 1 . 1/12/2012 I think that was perfect. :) You really wrote the characters very good and everything sounded nice and realistic. :) |
mushroomsrevenge chapter 1 . 12/10/2009 Awesome story P I loved the whole thiing, the premise, characterisations, the lot. Just in case you wanted to know (maybe someone's already told you this): Jill joined STARS because she was following in her father's footsteps basically (Dick Valentine, the theif). Jill got arrested for stealing and she was given a choice: either go to jail or use her lockpicking skill for the greater good and join STARS. But yeah I really enjoyed this fic. You're a good writer, and I LOVE pre-mansion fics. I miss them so much...T_T |
LaraSGCLena chapter 1 . 10/22/2009 Oh yes I had fun reading this! I've said it before; you're an excellent writer. I love your stories and will be looking forward to more. Actually I can see Jill and Chris having this kind of relationship from the start too. I believe Chris truly is a gentleman and an honest good hearted man. Loved the scene in the beginning, made me laugh lol and Wesker's creepyness...*shudder* Thanks! |
NewEnglandLycan chapter 1 . 6/15/2009 a very enjoyable read and a nice idea for how they went about getting to know one another. As a fan of the RE series I enjoyed this one. Keep up the good work. |
James Hawke chapter 1 . 5/15/2009 That was great. You should write a sequel. Or better yet, extend the story. I'd love to help you out. I'm just full of ideas for stories like this. |
Praxis Antigone chapter 1 . 4/4/2009 I don't understand why it took me forever to review for this fic. Your writing is so freakin' amazing! You can create a novel if you wanted to ;) |
Nathalia Oliveira chapter 1 . 3/31/2009 Nice, I like your take on these characters before RE1. The work you put into it shows and I'm sure I'm not the only reader who appreciates it. Thanks so much for posting such a nice, and in my opinion, in-character story! PS - It'd be fabulous if you'd be willing to continue this story. Don't get me wrong, it's great as is... it just left me craving more! |
blabbering chapter 1 . 3/26/2009 Amazing story, I'd also love to read more of this if you wanna continue? Pretty please? :) |
J.L. Zielesch chapter 1 . 3/25/2009 I'm interested in reading more of this. |
silver-fox89 chapter 1 . 3/25/2009 whoa your stories could rival mine in length but I love how it was written. beautifully described and so cute, it made me feel warm and fuzzy inside. for a score out of ten I'd give you a one hundred. keep on writing. |
WindyWildWolf chapter 1 . 3/25/2009 Aww...they are incredibly cute. Lovely writing, too. Great work pinning the characters to their personalities. -WindyWildWolf |