Should I be rooting for Leon and Claire to get together in this? Because I can't, you make him too dumb and too unlikable

I'm sorry, but Leon and Claire ending up together by this chapter did not come across as believable at all, it just happens for no reason, you pretty much ruined it with the other chapters by having Leon go on and on about Ada or who he just can't pick which one to be... when it's pretty damn obvious.

You had Claire call him out on what Ada did or tried to do him and yet Leon's explanation was nonexistent or it just came across as a desperate excuse... doesn't that tell you that the so-called love scenes between them was horrible written in RE2 and RE4? That it should be ignored for more realistic writing because your ignoring other things from the games as well, so I don't know why that wasn't.

You make Leon into such a fucking moron

Don't tell me Jill's "death"?

Eww ' that's so ga-ross

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwe , how sweet . I love a good story with complicated romance , and then they kiss. Ohh if only that could happen to me . :-)

Good Story...

Great work, I'm enjoying this so far. On to next chapter now.

Your story is wonderful! I really love it! Good job33

Well that was cute c;

I like the way you write and how this fic went on. I've always loved LeonxClaire pairing, but nothing beats ChrisxJill for me, but I always support LeonxClaire than LeonxAda.

Anyway great fic. Your timeline is a bit inconsistent. You describe Jill as a blonde in your fic and in Chapter 10, Chris and Jill has too look for Spencer which bothers me a bit since Spencer dies when they found him and Jill was still brunette at that time, after that she turned blonde when she "supposedly died" along with Wesker. Another thing, though its normal to mistake Leon for having brown hair, he actually has dirty blonde hair.

Then again, could AU right?

Awesome story! I love your style of writing :)

Hoping for a sequel~

Wow, this was reeeeally good! I hope there's a sequel lurking in your profile, if not, please write one. I can see angst and drama, throw in RE:5 and Degeneration and voila! One heck of a story to read. I really like the way you write, only thing that you could look out for was with paragraphs/Spacing. I sometimes didn't notice you'd changed perspective for a few lines. But that's nothing.

So off to check out your other stuff now, bye!

so far so good, though i noticed some of it are a bit off like the timeline since RE4 took place 2004 while RE5 took place during 2009 but I understand if its AU-ish

anyway keep up the good work *thumbs up*

Good story.

The conflicting emotions back and forth between all four characters was well written.

Yeah, it will be a tragedy for Chris at least until Africa...