Wow that was beautifully written and captured. It made me cry to see their inner thoughts at that moment.

*Sob* *sob* waaah! TOT

heart breaking sweet

this is so saddddddddd

So touching. T_T

I am very new in fanfictions but I have already spotted you as a quality reference here :-) This is great. In all your ANK fanfics, you grasp the very essence of the characters and express their feelings the same way the original author would probably have, but with your very own style.

You should also write books of your own, if you're inspired one day.

Thanks for such a good work and please keep it up !

May Iason and Riki rest in peace.

Passionate, flawless and sad. Why do you always have to amaze my eyes and my mind with the way you write? God you're like a natural poet. :D

I'm cring for your novel! It is so delicate! It is a masterpiece!

You are a nice writer.

Ah that was sweet they were together in the end sad though. The bit of of how Iason punishes Riki for lying and stealing was good I felt bad for Riki though. Good story I liked it.

Just came across this today. A very nice piece. Lovely.

Oh my god... I haven't cried like this from reading a fic in forever. You perfectly captured that moment, and more. I absolutely adore the way you described how they wordlessly communicated their love at the end... my god it's amazing.

-still crying- 3

Beautiful.

It's so sad ,I cry for riki and iason.

I like your fanfic.

That was beautiful...I loved it. Wonderfully written, in character, and so bittersweet. I almost cried. How could you not, when faced with Ai no Kusabi?

Awesome job )