It was short, but you pulled it off.
To be honest, I've never thought of how Mia would view things. Maya, Apollo- yes. But now that I think about it, Mia would actually be the one with the most thoughts. She saw how Feenie (young Phoenix) was originally, and the hobo Phoenix was well-written too.
The ending was the best though. Emotional, but not overly so. I look forward to more of you Ace Attorney works.
Zek signing out.

Whoa...amazing. You wrote this very well. Keep it up!

I enjoyed it. It was nice to see it all from Mia's point of view. I was really moved. I think your writing is very good. :)

Wow... just wow...

Seeing Phoenix through Mia's eyes is a first for me. And you really did a good job. Phoenix really is a great person. Who would have thought he would be so mature after all that has happened to him. He really had gone through so much in his life, and Mia has seen most of it from the other world. :D He came from immature to mature all too quickly for Mia.

Just amazing.

OH MY GOODNESS. Oh my goodness. This was just all kinds of crazy sadness! I loved how you showed Phoenix through Mia's eyes, and I loved how you explained the three different stages he went through over the series (I especially like the whole kid in pink/lawyer in blue/hobo in grey part). I never stop to think too much about Phoenix, but this really made me do so. Great job! :D

Potent!

I really enjoyed this. The take on Phoenix, all from Mia's eyes... very nice. The ending especially got me, his three 'selves', and his age beyond his years. I liked this. A lot.

Very nice.

This was such a sweet story! It's really great to see things from Mia's point of view.

Almost made me cry

Great job D

It's lovely. One of the best PW one-shots I have ever read. I would even say one of the best PW fanfics. I absolutely loved the last few lines. They were so poetic and I...nearly cried. Super XD

So true...Sad, but good.

I was wondering what Mia thought of Phoenix's disbarrment...

Amazing job.

this just left me misty eyed.

I loved it immensely. you did a really great job with it.

~GG

Love it.

Do I need say more?