I am the 40th reviewer. Here from tekking101.

I'm only here because of Tekking101's read-aloud of this fanfic

Good thing your mind was persistent enough to let you write this beautiful blessing in this site~

Everything about this was great and I love just how in character Franky and Robin were. The way you used their respective back-stories in this one-shot was executed well and everything just fell into place with each dot leading to another until the raw feelings of Franky were realized. I loved the setting and metaphors you used.

I died at this: "And loving you can't be a crime either."
I HAD TO STIFLE MY SCREAM THERE.

This is the most in-character I've ever seen them in a fanfiction! It is the best I ave ever read for this pairing. Thank you for posting this!

That was super cute.. Would you release a second chapter?

So cute wish there was more.

Hey! Awesome fic. But, zosan is awesome so it doesn't really own it.

Frobin is definitely my OTP in OP, and yes, I agree with you when you said it totally owned other pairs. Though Oda rarely (almost none, in fact) make any romance relationship, there're too many hints of this ship my fangirl radar can't simply ignore, lol. Anyway, I think your fic is one of the best Frobin fic out there. Especially love the part when his mind narrated all the pretty words yet he chose to let the lips worked xD Sooo cute! And well written, also in character. Thx for giving me such a good material for fandoming at this late night, lol

cute! :)

omgosh there is so much to love about this fic i dont even know where to start! the whole solving the efficiency problem 11 hours ago, being able to literally see franky in my minds eye exactly how you described him, absolutely everything was amazing! (im not sure about the moonlight thing - thought it was under the deck but who cares, that would definitely be surreal) anyways I've seen some awesome doujins but this is the first frankyxrobin fanfic i've read and I loved this. Will definitely be reading more :)

Ah, this is too cute!
And I think you got both of them perfectly in character!

awww, this is extremely cute...

Nice job! Two thumbs up!

awww, that was so heart-warming.
And by the way, I think you totally nailed their individual personalities! Awesome job!

Lolz and hella true to character. I especially love how he realizes he's no poet and lets his lips do the talking.