Just a note: you should put a warning for rape. People who have gone through situations like this and read your story could be seriously upset by it. I stopped myself before it bothered me much, but mature context is definitely not the same thing.

This isn’t a flame, by any means, just friendly advice.

You have an awesome grasp of Victorian Culture. This is written hauntingly well.

One side-note: Try not to use scientific terminology for body parts. Sometimes slang is more effective, and the readers feel a bit less like they're in Health Class. :)

oh my god i wanna cry so bad!

I loved this story as well, not sure if you have ended it with the second chapter, but you should continue it if possible, I think you are a great writer, and cannot believe anyone would flame your work.

wow

really good short fic, yeah

poor gemma

it was awesome and sad

lol

i like it! please post more!please

brilliant :)

Personally i love angst fanfics... they hurt so good...

They really get you wrapped up in teh charcters emotions and feelings. I would like to hate them but if they are beautifuly written then there is lots to enjoy. I just always like to look for a little hope. This story is not that lewd but gives you just enough. Love it!

One shot?

I cant imagine Simon to do that, but since he was drunk, I suppose anythings possible. XD Poor Gemma. :

Anyway, to the author of this fic, you did a great job with the writing. Im not normally one for rape, but I say you did this very well. :D

Ooh, I like this already.

Ill read the next chapter first. :D

This is really good. I really want to know what happens next! Please update soon :)

~Kelsey