Reviews for Into the Dark
CountOrlok777 chapter 5 . 8/1/2017
Its... interesting. Like watching a carwreck. I like it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
alright, i've only read the 1st chapter but i already love this. It's Link, samus, and snake in redident evil! How can you go wrong?! I'm certainly looking forward to reading this.
Neutral Entity chapter 22 . 3/20/2013
There are more than a few things wrong with this story, it's difficult to determine where to start.

First off, many characters are written “Out of Character” throughout the story. Most notable of these is Samus, who on multiple occasions seems to be on the verge of a crying, mental breakdown when her time as a bounty hunter should imply a reasonable level of maturity. Right at the beginning, Samus is driven nearly to tears all because Captain Falcon is taunting her like a playground bully. One would think such childish antics would be considered highly immature.

Also, every female character, regardless of their in-game personality, is written as a weak, vulnerable, damsel in distress in constant need of help and continuous emotional support from a male character. Zelda, Claire, and Samus seem to always be in these situations. Zelda, with her boundless magical talents can't escape an iron cage despite one of her Brawl moves being a short-range teleportation spell. Claire just shows up for no discernible reason (which is never explained to any degree). She's only there to be Leon's damsel, not much else. Samus constantly forgets that she has a array of weaponry and at one point has to be told, by a male character no less, that she even has them to begin with.

Leon's motivation is also absurd, relying on unbelievable logic and no explanation other than a “gut feeling” based on nothing. The Brawl characters even being in the city is also unbelievably dumb when each of them cannot put 2 and 2 together and figure out something is wrong. They then proceed into the city without their weapons, any way of contacting the ship, or any way of calling for help. There's “having a lapse in judgment”, but the incompetence displayed by the characters in this “story” takes it to a level never seen before.

I could go on, but I think my point has been made clear. This “story” is a poorly-written, poorly-executed, plot hole-ridden mess. The story's “cover” is little more than a lazy cut and paste Photoshop job that has nothing original or creative about it. Doing a crossover correctly is a daunting task. And I have yet to see one that does it “right” or even “well”.
rakuro chapter 17 . 1/22/2012
aftr rerading this ans playing a new game, heres what i have to say

nothing could beat the power of love da-ze~

master spark!

try searching it
Polginization chapter 23 . 4/28/2011
Well actually the whole series for resident evil 4 with Leon going to Europe could only really last a month at the most because its not like there was a whole lot of time in between the beggining of Res 4 and the ending. you can just say that Leon was traveling for awhile to get past the whole Los alluminum thingy (bad spelling i know) and with the whole smashing of the worlds its very easy to move dates around and everything. good story was really POed wheni saw snake die within the first few chapters. glad you brought him back! hope to read the next story and read some more good stories from you in the future!
Yurei chapter 11 . 11/30/2010
Hi there! I'm spanish so I thought I could help you with the spanish words the Iluminados say, well, there they go:

First of all this "ko-hay-lo" should be "Cogedlo" which would mean something like "take him" more or less w.

Then "mo-ies-fidi" should be "Morir es vivir" which would mean "to die is to live" yeah, thats a weird one n_ñ.

And finally "mat-eh-oh!" should be "¡Mátenlo!" wich would mean "kill him!" they say that a lot... Uu

Well I hope I could help you, and I hope you don't get mad at me -.-Uu (my english isn't that good either Uu)

By the way, sorry for being so late at writting you a review wUu! I relly like the fic and it's getting more interesting in each chapter... **
TomX chapter 2 . 9/21/2010
SNAAAKKE!
BloodRain Princess chapter 22 . 9/17/2010
Well, it's over. This story, at least. Time for the sequel after the extras. :P
BloodRain Princess chapter 20 . 9/17/2010
Story time! Heehee. Man, Master Hand is nuts... Go Smashers! Don't take his bullshit! Hahaha, Leon and Claire just take off running. xD

12 hours, huh? Wow, everything happened in such a short period of time... Jam-packed action! :D
BloodRain Princess chapter 19 . 9/17/2010
Crazy flying... How did someone not fly off a bed sooner? I was beginning to think they were strapped down or something. xD

I'm too spellbound to "review" anything... Epicness... My god, they finally made it out.

Um, hold on...there's one thing. Somewheres or another (whichever chapter it happens in) you had "conscience" when it should have been "conscious". Over-tired right now, and that doesn't go good with being a bit of a grammar/spelling nut... I suddenly remembered that it bothered me. x.x

Aside from little things like that, the chapters have just been one mass of greatness after another.
BloodRain Princess chapter 17 . 9/17/2010
You and cliff hangers... I can't stop to review because of them... (Meaning, it's so freakin' epic that I can't stop reading.)
BloodRain Princess chapter 13 . 9/15/2010
Man, another awesome chapter.

I get the feeling Ike really cares for Zelda... Taking off on his own... Or maybe he just feels that horrible about letting her get captured. Either way, he had better find her.

Oh fudge! Keys! x.x It's like "Hey, let's go back to where we started and suddenly see a door we missed and spent an hour searching for!" ...Darned key searches. xD Like the water temple in Ocarina of Time. I get so lost in there looking for keys or doors to match the keys... Whoops, rambling.
BloodRain Princess chapter 12 . 9/15/2010
First person is quite the change of pace after 11 chapters.

A few times I couldn't tell if she was thinking or if she was taking stock of her surroundings. It was a little odd in places, but it worked out.

And now someone has her by the throat. ._. Uh-oh...
BloodRain Princess chapter 11 . 9/13/2010
Oh my...oh my god... Lu-Lucario just s-scared me so much right there... Rage is dangerous...

"Snake!" "Samus!" "Snake!" "What!" It looks funny when reading it. xD

IKE? Ike was captured? Oh they're all doomed... I wonder what happened...?

Holy sh... O.o She knocked his head off? EWW! Not those guys! x.x

So much blood flying everywhere... Ooh look! A key! LoZ-style is what I'm picturing right now. xD

Waiwait... Leon said that Saddler guy died. . Grr, darned bad people not dying when they should. D Nevermind...

Yay, Ness is ok!
BloodRain Princess chapter 10 . 9/13/2010
Awesome chapter. That...that nightmare Leon had... It made me think of things I shouldn't be thinking about. Nice job totally depressing me! v.v

Next chapter!

(PS: Stupid merchant...)
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