ok, thats it. i m outta here

there is a small mistake here. in the kazekage's letter to the hokage, you have used the salutation: "dear Hokage". this is TOTALLY WRONG. this is a formal letter between two leaders of their respective villages, so informal greetings cannot be used here at all. think about it, if u do this to your collegue/boss IRL, your reputation will surely get tanked. do something abt this

this Mary Sue Naruto is grating my nerves

already, seriously? already on that big dick wave in the start of the first chapter

what is "ewe"

Drama queen

I loved it, and I see what you did there about her summon alignment, turtle. Heh.

Oh turtle. lol

dude finish it. Please its been 7 long years

Why did you mention your resolution, 1280*1024, as high resolution and talked about it making the formatting different? I dont know of many mainstream electronics that use anything lower than 1080 these days, Im on a 4K laptop (waste of money) and formatting is the same for ALMOST everything across the board.

I refuse to read this just because of the crappy description on the search page.

Wow naruto talked to both sages gained the rinnegan found out its history and gained it power to fight thr kyuubi i hope ypu contuine this story and i wonder whp wins the battle

I don't get it. Other than her big boobs, Hinata isn't that great. I mean. Damn, look at Hanabi in Boruto. She's smoking hot!

How is thst hanabi didnt notice his eyes were under a henge while she had the byukuguan activated or did see not pay atteti9m to them

What are hinatas flaut is it her shyness and her being self concuisuss

Good story shame it appears abandoned but overall it’s worth at least trying.