Reviews for The Mess After
skinnyjeansqueen chapter 8 . 4/13/2014
I love this story please hurry with the other chapters please
Kim chapter 8 . 11/13/2012
GAH! NOOOOOOOOOOO!

I wanna know what happens!

Waaaaaaah! :'-(
BrokenOcean chapter 8 . 6/18/2011
So, as this was last updated three years ago, I'm gonna go out on a limb and guess that there isn't going to be a next chapter? That sucks. This was an awesome story. :(
XLightningX chapter 8 . 8/27/2010
And I can't wait for the next chapter :)
maethebellydancer chapter 8 . 4/29/2010
Please continue. I heart OCD Kakashi.
FrOzEnDrAgOn chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
I really like this story! It sucks that you haven't carried on with it, there are so many good stories out there that are being left unfinished. Please consider finishing it!
sara chapter 8 . 9/21/2009
i love your story, its so perfect, but when do you want to UPDATE, PLEASE HURRY
Jennifer chapter 8 . 8/22/2009
I love this story. Please, please, please finish it or at least continue with another mind blowing chapter. I love it. Thanks.
i am the night angel chapter 8 . 8/19/2009
OMG I love this story!

Kakashi seems to be having trouble on his mission O He believed the kid, and the client! He cared what they had to say! Oh dear, that can't really end well for him!

I'm not sure if I left a review on 'Good Clean Fun' and if I didn't I'm sorry I just wanted to get on to the next chapter xD But I loved that too! It was so emotional! Both stories are!

Great work and I can't wait for your next update
NovoCained chapter 8 . 7/10/2009
Awesome, sequel! Your writing style is awesome (though at times I wonder if you ever considered getting a beta...). Made me laugh one moment and my heart ache the next in the prequel. I love it. Humor, but also the best h/c I've read in a while.

Kudos!
Ryu Earth chapter 8 . 5/29/2009
Poor Iruka and Kakashi as they struggle through this, but I can see what it is you are trying to say

Thanks for the update )
melissa chapter 8 . 5/29/2009
Kakashi and Iruka are both so confused and frustrated I want to hug them. Those two foreign ninja have me curious so as always I can't wait for the next chapter.
VampireDoll666 chapter 8 . 5/28/2009
Thanks for the update, hope Kashi' leg will be alright.*smiles*
KakashiKrazed chapter 8 . 5/28/2009
What I found interesting in this particular chapter was the complete switchover of characteristics in Iruka and Kakashi...here you showed Iruka acting like (dare I say it) Kakashi when he's a monster...and Kakashi acting like Iruka by (heaven help us) listening to people instead of just remaining in mission mode...that switchover was masterfully played and the juxtaposition between the two made it all the more powerful.

I somehow doubt things will go too smoothly for Kakashi in the next chapter - and I look forward to seeing where you go next...

'Krazed
Cptn. Suz chapter 7 . 5/26/2009
I, for one, didn't have any trouble following the fight sequence. Kakashi's explanation at the end cleared up the whole feint.

Good thing he's so stoic because it's gotta hurt to be running and jumping with a kunai stuck in his thigh muscles!
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