omg pls write a sequel!

Please, please, please, please, please can you bring out a sequel? I know it's been like six years but this is one of my favourite stories that I've read and it's not on good to not have one. So please? (literally begging)

please sequel

Loved reading this story! Is there a sequel?

Your story was fantastic! I love it!
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Aww! I loved this! Very well done! Excellent use of details and emotions, you kept them well in character to boot! I wish you made a sequel, like maybe the three of them, Edmund, Lucy, and Jasmine going back to Narnia, Jasmine reclaiming her memories perhaps? That would rock. Anyway, great work, keep up the great job!

HAHAHA AWWWWWW ;) hehehe *gigglegiggle hehehehehe! sorry, im having a giggling fit. hehe. for a minute i was sad, then i was like OMG THIS LEAVES SO MANY QUESTIONS, but then i thought, hmmmmm, i wonder if you PLANNED to keep the possibilities open... hmmmmm. could you write a sequel maybe? i'd keep than in mind, because SO MUCH COULD HAPPEN! well, to sum it all up, you story was- no IS amazingly epic. kinda hoping for a sequel? XD

Excellent story and a (near) perfect ending. I really enjoyed what you did; however I am a bit disapointed that she seems to have no memory of Edmund or Narnia. Without those memories how can she ever know the Just king?

But still, I loved the whole story. Great job!

The thing about love is, you don't know what's wrong with you until it hits you with the force of a tone of bricks.

And that's what happened in this case; generally people know each other very well before they start talking about love. Only, nowadays people are more weary of the answer they might receive. No ones afraid to say the stupid three words; everyone's just afraid of how the other will respond.

Edmund's love in this story was so carefree, so gentle, so unexpected, that made Jasmine find out what she would've known after years of self-journeying - she loved him too.

This fic was too sort for my liking; then again, the movie Prince Caspian was too short for my liking. You write amazingly and I just wanna shout that out here.

I think the fact that she forgot about it all was a genius' play. It couldn't POSSIBLY be that easy - oh you're here. Let's date now, shall we?

Never that. You made it a door to a sequel (a rather UNupdated sequel, may I remind you!) majestically. It made it infinitely harder, but at the same time, indefintetely easier. Edmund has another chance to conquer her heart, but he also has to let go of whatever has happened before; Jasmine is happy in this world, no abusive father or anything. That was a large part of what she became: terrified of her very shadow. He has to learn how to work with that, this Edmund. He only knew her as someone with an unhappy past. Will it affect the way their relationship worked - or used to - or would work? I don't know. That's why we have the sequel.

A rather UNupdated sequel, I daresay. Humph. Well.

I know this is a rather large and fat review, and probably you'll be tired of reading it by now, but I just wanted to get all the impressions of this story here. As I have already reviewed every chapter, I cannot review this story anymore - let us say, in a few months I'll read it again - what will I have to say differently? Will it be on this review already? I hope it is. Otherwise I'll just drop a PM or log out and anonymously review, signing 'Lu.'

Haha. Anonymously sign my name.

Anyhow, congratulations on your work. I deeply respect it and rather envy it: I know I, for instance, could never write like this.

Update the sequel, young lady.

-LuMezenga, signing off for the last time

Okay, maybe it was a little mean not to say goodbye to Caspian or anything!

...but this was a sweet chapter... I just wish they had kissed when saying goodbye!

That part, "not even a little bit, not even at all," sounded EXACTLY like the scene where Cat reads the poem to Patrick in "10 things I hate about you"!

Seriously!

"Susan and Peter are everybody now?" I tell that to my friends all the time! They're always like, "EVERYBODY knows it." "Name everybody." "Oh you know. EVERYbody."

... AAAHHH one chapter Ed declares, then she declares, then before they can get together a bloody BATTLE starts, then the battle ends, there's the celebration, and she shoves him off.

UGH.

Hate you.

-LuMezenga

Own, that bit about men being prideful? Such a sweet part!

And her calling him by his nickname was well-put. About time, Jasmine!

GO TREES! GO ASLAN! FOR NARNIAAAAAAA!

-LuMezenga

Oh the drama. Seriously. Just when Ed was about to get what he came for! Poor thing had been turned down after such a declaration on the chapter before!

And now that Jasmine finally comes to realize her feelings for him, a bloody ARMY shows up.

This is seriously messed up.

I want the fluffy scene!

-LuMezenga

Ps, I DO hope there is a lot of fluff, young woman ;)

"Some girl out there should pity all the men of the world and write a dictionary for women and their cryptic words." LOL! We're so easy to read, men are the twats.

Their interaction and Jasmine's reactions to his words were quite sincere and realistic, mind you.

And poor Ed, rejected! Jasmine!

Just go and say the freaking L Word so he can be soothed!

Ugh, this is so exhasperating. I'm so glad it'll be over soon.

-LuMezenga

Ps, I take that back, I don't WANT IT TO END!

She's so in denial. I hear you, Jaz, I've been there. We just never seem to admit it aloud, right?

Oh and their argument/banter/dialogue was very believable...

And am I the only one who can't wait to hear what Edmund would have answered her...?

Oh, these chapters are so very SHORT! I wish they'd last longer...

-LuMezenga