This story is amazing and I love it so much.

This is really good!

WHY AM I HAPPY ABOUT THIS IKE X STAN ACTION?

Dude. This is an awesome fic, thanks for giving the time to write it :3

Nevermind, I totally understand that whole roof scene now. I think part of it was that Kyle was trying to see whether or not he could scare Stan away. Random, but I like that Kenny wears flannel in this fanfic.

This is really good. Kyle's definitely an interesting character. He pushed Stan off the roof on purpose, right? Did he do that because he wanted to keep Stan in South Park longer?

Yo.. that was fucked up. Amazingly, brilliantly written, but so fucked up, haha. And as a mass review for all your other South Park stories I binged on, I love your writing style. Everything is so poignant and flawed and real, the world you build just sucks me in.

I like how each of the characters are insufferable in their own ways, how yeah you might love a person but that doesn't mean they're not ridiculous as hell, or they they don't annoy the fuck out of you. And vice versa.

Anyway, I'm rambling now. But for real, rarely have I seen anyone capture so well that strange mix of small town drudgery, coming of age, and the insanity of South Park canon so well.

Great story. I love how REAL this is. It's completely fucked up, of course, but more of a real life kind of way then the typical South Park way. I'm still not sure whether to like the fact that you made Kyle batshit insane, but it was an interesting decision and well, made the story pretty different and special. This be some gooood shit. Keep it up.

HE FUCKING PUSHED HIM OFF A ROOF TO 1. SCARE HIM OFF 2. KEEP HIM THERE

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Is that what Kyle was talking about when he said Stan should be glad he didn't hit him with a hot skillet? Like, he wants to take care of Stan so he finds ways to hurt him?

Anyway, Stan was an asshole in this but it was understandable. Um, not excusable. Like he was being purposefully oblivious to what an asshole he was.

God I hope they have a happy life together Jesus there is so much wrong with this.

That was brilliantly written, really nice story. It doesn't look like you use the site anymore, so I won't bother writing too much, but thanks for a great read

I loved some of the dialogue, and Ike's character was brilliant. Loved the way that Stan and kyle were so unusually portrayed and yet kind of deserved each other? Though it was such a depressing final couple of chapters. I was hoping you'd maybe throw us a bone (like Ike getting a happy ending somehow?) but there was nothing haha.

Still, loved it!

Open-ended, yum. I think that was an appropriate way to leave this one.
Man, Kyle is pretty vindictive about the college thing and their roles being reversed finally, but I guess he has a right to be.

Liked the giant douche reference, so very subtle.
I think their arguments were interesting since they circled back and contradicted to much. It just showed how deep things went, how unsure they both were.
Interesting to note that Kenny didn't mention the plans to Stan.

I was a bit confused as to why Stan kept suggesting Kyle had a gender identity issue when Kyle was talking about his misdiagnosis.
Other than that, I liked all the BPD details you brought in, it made Kyle's claim seem authentic.

Looks like Stan's getting his shit together. Gutsy of him to call Loren. I like that this chapter really gives us a new perspective on Loren... I think this is the first/one of the first times we actually hear from him first-hand instead of through the obscuring lens of Stan's angst.
Also, very unperceptive of Stan not to see that Kyle had been deeply hurt by he and Ike's one night stand. This feels like a chapter of turning points and realizations.