| Reviews for Control |
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   Burninghammer63088 chapter 4 . 8/30/2016 A wonderful story. So well detailed, and written. And so sensual, lusty and Erotic yet very tasteful. I really enjoyed. Thank you for sharing. Is this the last chapter or will there be more? Dan F |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/5/2013 Mmmmnn. Tasty. Will there be more? I certainly hope so. |
| spinnerofdark chapter 4 . 3/27/2013 Hot |
| semper-fii chapter 4 . 12/2/2012 your writing and use of detail is amazing, i have no complaints and no criticism, everything was perfect! please continue, love it |
| A for Antechinus chapter 1 . 3/20/2012 Oh wow, what a great start. I really liked this chapter... now onto the next chapter. |
| RainboIsland chapter 4 . 7/23/2011 Also pretty flippin amazing. |
| RainboIsland chapter 3 . 7/23/2011 Well that was pretty flippin amazing. |
| RainboIsland chapter 1 . 7/23/2011 Sexy, seems like a promising story |
| madfoxzz chapter 4 . 10/12/2010 whew! Nice! |
| Writing For The Wall chapter 4 . 6/10/2010 OMG...a friend just found your story and suggested it to me, so I had a bit of catching up to do. Two words: LOVE IT! Cannot wait for the next chapter! If you ever want constructive criticism or ideas, feel free to message me! |
| Special Agent Stace chapter 4 . 4/15/2010 So. Good. And so. Hot. In fact one of the best Abby/Ziva slashes I've ever read. The introduction was interesting, a good twist on why Abby hated Ziva at first. And the sex was written really well- but what about Ziva? You should totally add to this :) |
| Ch3r chapter 4 . 1/29/2010 HOT. is the only word for it. Are you continuing? |
| SlightlyComical chapter 4 . 12/7/2009 more now and when I say now i mean NOW |
| litafan82 chapter 4 . 11/9/2009 Amazing story and even that truely doesn't cover what I think of it. I truely hope that there is more to come. |
| Nerdy Gamer chapter 4 . 10/5/2009 Wow that was a wycked story I hope to read the next chapter soon if there is one. Thanks for the read. |
