I've throughily enjoyed the fics, however I must tell you all this. If you commit a willing sex crime you must do the time and pay the price. It's not okay for the victim to pay the price! Onto the sequel, where I'll hopefully be nicer.

Another brilliant fanfic!

you made me hate dumblendore even more, and hate the magic world as well

An absolutely fantastic story. This is so well written. Kudos to the writer.

I think I enjoyed most in this story was the Kreighely boys. I loved the fight toward the end where he beats Nick and stays leader.

Good otherwise, and will read the sequel.

Is it a play of words derived from the Hogwarts motto?

Haha! Piss 'im off and you're toast!

Your story is great. I just loved.

I just wanted to pull you up on a factual point - Oxford/Cambridge cost no more than any other university to attend. In some cases, depending on the college, it can actually work out cheaper than other universities.

Man, for an OC I love Sarah and Ross (and all the boys at Kreighley actually, I just didn't feel like listing them one after the other...), They are very well developed characters!

I'm still curious what happened to Remus and Dobby but there is the next story for that. And I love how you made Luna a seer. Yay Luna!

It's awesome how you bring in random characters from the book for short spurts, like with Lee Jordan in the hospital (I was clutching my hands in horror and fear during that scene... go Harry for killing that fucker (I'm actually of the believe that certain people deserve death as a punishment)).

Now, on to the next story! I'm a bit sad that I'll have to wait for updates now, but this story is fabulous!

Will the sleeping dragon be woken? Knowing the Anirage... probably. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Cheers!

I got thinking about it (thank you for dropping me the line about this continuation by the way) and your Aniragi/wizarding world is really disgusting as a whole. I mean yeah, the real world is pretty horrible but if there was news about a 15-year old boy being handed over to a terrorist for sex by the government in exchange for... whatever it may be, there would be a huge out cry... possibly a revolt against the government. Sure there would be a few people who would think it worth it and a few who wouldn't care and even a few who would think it was a good idea all around, but for the most part people would... be really loud and violent...

So seeing the wizarding world's general apathy... it makes me hope that they will be destroyed and rebuilt from the ashes into something better.

After all, really corrupt societies do not last very long. They tend to cause huge, irrevocable damages that they leave behind and they also tend to bring other societies down with them, but they do fall. The people themselves will revolt.

However the wizard's... it's not just their government that's corrupt... it's they themselves.

Anyway, as usual your writing is fabulous as usual and I'm glad you're continuing it. *begs* Please don't make Tonks evil or pathetic or useless... please?

Oh by the way, what ever happened to Remus... he got sent to the wolves and he never came back... does he even know what happened? Is he dead? If he was mentioned in the previous story past Dumblef*ck sending him to negotiate with the werewolves I must have missed it... or forgot it... what? That's is so horrible of me...

Oh! And Dobby? Now that Dumblef*ck is dead, what happened to Dobby? I love Dobby as much as I love Hedwig (and Rowling killed both... and Fred... and Colin... and Tonks... Damn her...)

Ira-na: Stop b*tching and finish the review you noob.

Have I ever told you to shut up you nattering voice in my head?

Ira-na: Many times.

Just so we're clear.

Moving on from my dillusions, I'm kinda hoping Luna will show up soon because she is awesome fun. In fact I feel the need to stop prattling now and continue reading.

Excellent work!

Cheers!

this was a good story, will there be a sequel?

An ominous ending! Looking forward to part three.

I really really really hope there will be another series!

Though I also kinda hope there won't... but that's just because I spent every waking minute reading this and the first part and only just finished :P

It's so nice to have a GOOD story that's actually well written.

So yes, overall, more please :P

This series makes a lot more sense to me than canon, given human nature. It really is unrealistic to have a subpopulation, steeped in corruption and prejudice, that views Muggles as less than human and not expect more of them to treat them that way. After all, if Muggles are just animals who look like humans, why not keep them as slaves? Just like a pet, only useful for a different purpose.

I hope you do create another sequel. I'm wondering how long it will take Hermione to realize that, for her to have been born, her mother was probably raped-possibly even by the father of someone she knows. Though most of the wizarding population seems to be more than a bit lacking in common sense...she had it, but it seems continued contact has worn it down. Will she make that connection, that if Muggles are kept as sex slaves, magic makes casual rape even easier? Will she even want to?

When I was younger, reading the books for the first time, I thought Hogwarts seemed like an amazing idea. Magic, of course, what could go wrong? But the whole society, even in the books, is backwards. Even if magic were real, and I had it, I would not live in the Wizarding World of canon. (And definitely not in the one you have created here.) I equate it to being offered a small measure of power in order to go live as a second-class citizen in a third world country, where most of the people I meet would look down on me and I would never really fit in, not to mention the constant threat of death from my neighbors for their fun or profit. Definitely not worth it. At least in the Muggle world, we have legal recourse when things go wrong. Not perfect, of course, but better than the ridiculous "trial" described in OotP.

Anyway. I enjoyed this story, and the first one, a lot, and it made me think, which is unusual and gratifying in a fanfic. I hope you continue.