I read this awhile back and just found and read it again and I'm still amazed at how amazing this is. The blog description and how captain hammer reacted to it was brilliant and then also at the end took my breath 's defiantly an amazing and wonderful fanfiction,i applaud you.

That... Was... Awesome!

Wow...this was...there are no words. Really. This just stunned me. Completely. I don't care that it's short. I don't care that it's only one chapter. I don't want more. More of your writing, I just like this as is. Just...wow.

Hip to be Square,

Dragon

Oh wow. This is awesome!

This was haunting. The last line really got me.

Great job.

All I can say is... wow. Very sad. Very touching.

Loved it. Short, sweet, and completely believable. Great job!

wow. that was good. i am speechless and think i may have even cried a little.