So far this had been an interesting story. A lot of thought has gone into it, although perhaps a little more time spent on proof reading is needed - it would take away much of the confusion as you repeat yourself a few times and the sentence structure is sometimes very hard to read.

Disappointed that i’ve read all these chapters for it not to be finished.

what the fuck is going on?

Hello I just wanted to say that I absolutely love this story and I would really love to see how it ends. Are you planning on writing more chapters? I hope so I am hooked on and really excited. hope to hear from you soon.

So much drama this chapter

I am definitely confused about what Lena is trying to do by appearing to be the spy and shutting Ernie out. It is also unusual that Andrea is taking her side, and want to know more about the Lena/Ernie relationship.

The biggest thing is of course of the merging of Hermione and Brawyn. While I understand that she has to "kill" someone to get be unprotected and break the spell, I don't understand why Efynsien would want her to choose to kill Ron since he wants to continue using that body. I keep thinking that there must be some magic associated with the dagger that will break the connection between Hermione and Ron, but allow Brawyn forever to keep Hermione's body.

They really have to include Ron in discussion to really understand everything about Efynsien and finally work together instead of working apart - whenever they work separately, they seem to make things worse.

All the evil things that Efynsien is doing - he has to be stopped.

Oh, I wish you would someone come back and finish this story!

Just finally read these last chapters, and they are definitely bringing up more answers and more dilemmas for them to figure out how to get Ron and Hermione back.

That twisted Efynsien is really horrible and seems to be completely taking over. Especially, since he has been faking a well Ron or making Ron fake being well with the pills.

I am surprised to see so much Lance. I keep thinking that somehow Ron is lance - like when the gave her fake memories, they put in a lance character so he could talk to her. But does that mean at times Ron is there enough to respond back, or is it now Efynsien.

I know im supper late in time with this story but in case u still check the comments or for new readers like myself i just want to say that even though i read this seating down on the couch your story is so heavy and realistic that after readin just two chapters at a time, i feel compleatly emotionaly and physically tired. Like if i had a huge fight with my best friend after running a marathon.
You make me want to curl up with a blanket and cry myself to sleep.
IN THE BEST WAY POSSIBLE!
You are an amaizing writer. Very good work. I wish you the best of luck.

I like concept feeling and other things. But ur story is very confusing. Time line is so confusing. Though i just crazily l

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE ! OMG PLEASE

Wow, okay. Confused I am. This is great, I love this story!

I know that it will explain itself bur I am really confused

-elsa

You should definately update. It's a great story. You have to write the end.

You made the best of 2013 Rec list

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Update! xxxxx

Can you just please finish!

what the heck woman!? why is my preciouses Ron a huge jerk;)