No offense meant here, but this is way too short. It’s such a good first chapter but this book is only five chapters. It’s a really good start.
What I meant in the first sentence is that the book is way too short for my liking. Like I said no offense meant.

hi i just wanted to say i loved this story so far and i know you haven't updated since 2009 but i would love it if you did :) hope to see an update for this in the future ~ angelica

Please update this i cant wait to see what happens and who he gets paired with...hooefully lina or daphne or both for potter and black

This is a great story so far...i wonder what harry has in for the traitors...i wonder if he he going to prank them...is harry going to be a horcrux will he go to grinnotts to get rid if it and have the goblins to find the rest of them..as for pairings can we have Harry/Daphne, Neville/Luna, Blaise/Tracy, Terry/Susan and Justin/Hannah or change Blaise/Hannah, Terry/Tracy and Justin/Susan or Blaise/Susan

Please update soon

I wish you had not abandoned this i really like it

I hope u write again soon the story is interesting

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

great chapter. plse update

I like a lot of your story but the amount of money you have Harry throwing at prospective teachers is just crazy.. 10million galleons? a million would be crazy but 10 is just outrageous. Yes they may be masters but if you do the numbers right even a master in the HP universe is lucky to make 20k galleons- 50 galleons a year. A million or even a million a year is more than generous enough. Add in he's giving them a protected home free of charge in a hidden location. Yeah crazy money just falling from the sky.

This is a great story I hope you will update soon.

Amazing! :D
Loved it!

this is awesoem keep it going

want more!

Love your story. i would love it if you would update soon.. being in the hospital with cancer i need good stories to read and yours is one of the good ones that i think will develop into a great story