I think it's an awesome idea and totally different from everyone elses that I have read so far! With that said... I'm patiently waiting for you to get back to writing this story *tapes foot OBVIOUSLY impatiently* lol ;) but seriously I think it would make for a great story

I'm intrigued! I would love for u to continue w/ this story! It looks as if u have put some thought into this when u wrote about disrupting the time space continuum. I'm anxious to know what ur creative mind plots! )

I like the story and would like to see what will happen next. Please continue with it.

Wow.

I would love to see this story continued and see Serenity's reaction to Darien. Maybe Darien could take the place of one of his family members in the past (Endymion) or have changed the future enough so that Serenity and Diamond have a great great great great great great (you get the point) granddaughter named Serena...

;)

I hope you continue this story...

finish

Oo, this could be a a really great story...I really hope u continue this story.

I'm most intrigued! I hope you will post a second chapter.

Have a wonderful week!

Saki

I think you should make this one shot into a story. What do you think? A time-traveling Darien is something that I don't think has been done yet...at least, not like this!

GOD BLESS!

Hikari

i wold like to know what will happen in this story

i want to know what happens. when he goes to the past, how serena reacts to him all of it. update soon please.

You should continue writing this story, this is very interesting and a fun concept.

Update! Update! Update!

This is very interesting. I could see this being able to go forward since there is so many questions the plot proposes that are interesting.

Interesting.

I think this is a great start...it definitely has potential to become something great. The plotline is intriguing, and I would love to read more. :)

~Andi