Oh gosh. Hatori to me seems like such a broken, yet reserved character. But then again, most of the Shomas are like that. This was an interesting, yet sad twist, and I feel that you did well with this story. My favorite line was this: "I don't heal anyone, I just patch them together so that they can be ripped apart again." Unfortunately, that describes the many situations Hatori finds himself in.

very nice. i really liked how not only you put hatori and an oc character in here, but also related hanako with hatori's own family member's memories... makes it that much more touching... :)

I really like this one.

Aw Hatori! I really like this. This is very touching and moving.

how sad :( yet happy ;)

After reading all your humorous fics I didn't expect something this deep. Good work.

This is such a touching story, I can see so clearly how you depicted the nicer, more human side of him. Nice! :)

This story shows a sweet, tender side of Hatori, not the cold, emotionless side of him that reader normally see. Nice work.