Its straight . . I like it just chill with the songs a little too much yakno? Cause nobody really care about the songs they care about what you writing

This was epicccc

Loved it :D keep writing !

Hey girl, loved every bit of this story! There were bits and pieces that could use some ironing out (every writer has them), but I love it anyway.
I like how you portray Huey and Jazzy ;) I like that they balance each other out! Someone had to take on that monumental responsibility :P
Hell, I still can't get over how you housebroke the little playa wannabee ;) Both of their trifflin asses lmao
Keep it up, and don't let the haters bring you down. Smile :D

I honestly do not like jazmine and Cindy right now. If you bully a girl for so long and make her life hell, how is she suppose to forgive you? Its pathetic that Cindy bullied her because of jealousy.

Also I was bullied and you never can forgive the girls who made your life hell.

good job ceaser be da man ya pops couldnt im so proud of yhu

wow

omg zuri im so srry

tom take yo dirty ass raunchy ass dusty ass little dick ass bitchin ass somewhere bitch and zuri yhuon my hit list dirty smut

awww who new riley had a heart zuri yhu dirty ass dusty ass raunchy asss bumb ass bitch let me find yhu in the streets bitch :(

damn jazzy made a brotha shed a tear and shit

finally got damn

cindy not as tough wat da hell

huey is always ruining a moment he kno he should have kissed

hey, recognise me? I'm not Who's askin' anymore! say hello to my new profile!ur story still sucks though.