Now will they all reacts?

Did Lily and James lose their memory then and poor harry

For starters, I liked this story, it was a nice spin on a dark resorted Harry. However, there were quite a few plot issues that made the story hard to keep track of in a sense that I kept stopping to think on how it could make sense. Like Ginny's almost instant forgiveness after trying to "steal" Blaise. The glaze over of Lily showing up to the wedding and Dumbledore doesn't seem to react to it. Or the very random throw in that Percy is Lily and Severus's son with no other explanations or conclusions to the aftermath of that whole bit. Then the entire point of Melkra doing whatever he was meant to do, plot continuation be damned, it made no sense to be in there if it was only to be used how it was. Nevertheless a good story, sadly I don't think I'll be reading the sequel. Thanks for writing.

Yes I actually ship Drarry but since the storyline is awesome and deserves Straight As I have tolerated the fact that it's Blaise/Harry ;)

i cant stop laughing draco has boobs mione reaction my gosh im laughing to hard

i enjoy this story, but you should try working up to all the information, the story is relly fast paced, and it seems really werid everyone is just so excepting of everything so quickly

I kind of like the story, but the story and Harry's attitude are really childish. I think after all he went through the first 4 years in Hogwarts (I'm not counting what he went through with the Dursleys) he'd be much, much more mature than how you portray him in this story. In my opinión the childishness and Harry's attitude kind of ruins the story...

Dean since he was a traitor based on Dumbledore's idiotic views

I dont understand why you have them all take the mark if it is supposed to be an infiltration team, to be honest the whole idea of the dark mark is ridiculous it point out to everyone one just what side you are on.

To me everything is really out of the blue. Dumbledore is suddenly the bad guy and everyone hates him? Harry is suddenly evil? And all of this comes with no warning, I think this was just a way to kill off Dumbledore with no motivations for his goals at all, no explaining why he's really bad, he's just there to be killed off by Harry.

STUPID STUPID STUPID

I really hate you for making them rape Harry

Hi! I really liked the plot but the story was too rushed and I honestly don't think that if Harry found out his parents are ALIVE he'd just passed out and just that. You said that there was a heartfelt reunion with Lily but what about James. I'm sorry, I just didn't liked the way you developed the plot

Hello, While I like your plot for this story, its too rushed and the plot isn't developed properly, tbh I only reached the second chapter before I stopped reading. You need to develop it better cause its too...nice basis I give you that.

Blaine draco and harry should have a three boyfriend thing with double penetration