Great! Best ikarishipping story ever!

While i normally despise the pairing of Paul and Dawn this story was well written and hilarous good job

This was so cute! Especially after the last two stories of yours that I just read XD

This was adorable! Seriously whenever I play Pokemon and there is a daycare in the game I take my time to breed a pair for a lot of times and intend to get myself a shiny, I also do this in order to obtain a Pokemon that has the perfect set of hidden abilities, traits, natures and all those technical stuff. Call me crazy, but I don't really mind taking a lot of time to finish the game, because I enjoy breeding my darling Pokemon. That's why I loved this story, because it reminded me of how fast the daycare grandpa gets out and offers eggs and how frequently my Pokemon produces eggs once one egg was produced (They're so in love.. awww... hahaha). Anyways, I like the Dawn and Paul fluff here, I have always believed that there was always an underlying sexual tension in their encounters. And LOL to the scarring lecture on the Starlies and the Combees, poor Dawn :3

very good fic xD hahaha , that if this crazy old man ! but that is going to do? xD I liked it really :))

_' ummm... I don't know what I think of this. The talk? Do you mean... S...E...X? I am now scarred for life with mental images.

Very entertaining with all those eggs! Wish it was that fast in the games, would have made it so much faster to hatch for shinies ;)
The ending was very sweet, but it was a bit contradictory, going from 'I don't remember her name' to 'I'm in love with her' in just a few hours.

This is really funny

Funny, but strange...

Hahahahaha! I love this story! So funny

Ha ha ha! That was funny, you should do more

This was hilarious!

Loved it ! : )
Write more dawn and paul romance fanfiction

I liked this one, its funny... "giggling"

My God! I nearly choked at that last line! This was hilarious!