Good start hope there is more

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE Update

Hi everyone,

Very long time no see! I'm so sorry I left on cliffhanger; life got in the way and nothing has been the same since! I would like to finish this do I will have a look on my computer and see if I can recover the final chapter. Thanks for all the reviews and messages, I'll try not to disappoint you.
touc x

Update!

I like this story. Please continue/update.

You can't stop there. Update nowwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

You really need to finish this story. Lots of potential.

It's been over a year since your last review...

Are you going to finish the story?

I like it very much so please do!

Very interesting. Wondering why anyone is after them? Kidnapping? IR? Love big brother Scott instincts.

Interesting idea, but I keep wondering why they aren't wearing thier wristcomms? Surely they would be wearing them as they are away from the island, especially when travelling over rough country like this.

Hiya!

Great work, touc. Glad I could be of use to you. And hey, even though I'd read this several times over before you posted it, I still enjoyed reading it now! Especially the last section. You having me begging for more *hint hint*. Lol.

Great work with the separating line between the scenes, it's a lot easier to read now. It looks good, too! Tee hee.

See ya soon.

Bump xoxoxoxoxoxoxox

Good thing the Tracy's have already figured out that John and Alan are missing, especially sionce the people who brought the plane down are already looking for them!

Good start!The two blond Tracy...I love them! now I'm waiting for more XD update soon?

Fatastic start. LOL-Scott might be mad about his plane, but he;ll be more worried about his brithers-especially Alan.

Thanks to everyone for your helpful and kind comments. First attempt and you all have been very kind. I will try and make corrections ASAP, I'm a bit of a perfectionist! Normally I work with an editor and now you see why...I think a beta-reader would be useful in future.

Thanks again everyone.

touc xx