Loved it! This was amazing. Honestly, I feel this story would have been much better if it were actually canon than what we did get for season 4. Nice job! :)

Good job with the botched hunt, the reason for Sam's amnesia, and for realizing it's not just Dean that was at fault. Love this too.

I really enjoyed both of the stories and I'm glad you decided to write the second one to clarify what had happened to Sam. Very well-written. Thank your for sharing!

Yay, happy ending!

nice!

Wonderful, wonderful sequel. I not only loved finding out what happened. I loved the way you created the scenes with your writing. I could actually see what was happening and hear the traffic and other background noises.
thanks

Wow! I loved this story. Loved the bond you 'fix' between the brothers and love how you showed their love for each other and how they can put all the trouble brewing between them aside and pick up their mantle of brotherhood again. Can't wait for this to happen in the current season 9! Thanks so much! Hope you write something for Season 9..hint?

Well that was just amazing. Quite the revelation. I loved it. xo

YES!

I was looking at your profile and stories. Didn't realize how many of yours I haven't read. I prophesize I shall be reading a lot today. Love your writing.

very nice, I love the brotherly bonding moments and that you make them work instead of one of them just balling their eyes out or something. You keep them pretty in character

Great concluding chapter, and not surprised Sam remembered it all after Dean pointed the shotgun in his direction and got him to drop. Not surprised Dean didn't want Sam to remember but good thing he did so they could eventually talk about it and Dean know that Sam didn't blame him, they were both to blame that day, going into a hunt angry and distant. Perfect ending, and love that Sam used Bobby's words back at him!
A great read.

Again the brotherliness we were so missing in Season 4. So Sam is getting bits and pieces back in his memory, but will he remember it all, or will Dean finally tell him what went down, despite him not really wanting Sam to know?

Oh that was nice! It's sad that the brother's anger tends to make them hurt each other but at least they take care of each other in the end! Nice job :)

Awesome. The way you wrote the memories, interspersed with the hunt they were on, was really effective. And your word choices were awesome. Really in character. I loved it. :D