Are you thinking of adding any atall ya know they get in touch with his team but theres a storm and they cant get to them something like that

lolll that was funny (*ponders* is it bad to think that torture and a serial killer is commical...NAWWWWWW) love your stuff always have always will!

i second morgan on that how did he do that...although my first theory involves 3 fishermen and a goat...

great storry!

This was absolutely brilliant. I was grinning like a loon not even halfway through it, and laughing so hard I was crying by the time it was done.

okay, while i can see hotch survivng all of this, i cant imagine this actually happening

the ending was kinda abrupt ya know?

and Morgan keeps on saying "woah man" it's kinda annoying... (no offense though...)

and nobody says ouch when a bullet just ripped through your chest... (again, no offense)

other than that, it was a nice story... keep up the good work... :))

BWAHAHAHAHA! Brilliant :D I laughed all the way through it, it was simply hilarious. LT told me "READ IT" and I'm glad I listened.. So fun, such manly men they are - they can take anything, can't they? I know I'd say more than "ouch" if I got shot in the chest, and 15 quarts of blood, holy moses! That's a lot of blood! On the other hand, Hotch IS superman disguised as a mild mannered FBI-agent. Erm. Scratch that. *cough*

Nice job!

That was different! Is it odd that I couldn't stop myself from giggling at Reid's use of the English language and my favourite new word is "Ep!"

ROFOL! Wonderously insane darling.

And somehow they all recover fully and without a scar to show for their experiences!

I want to know more about Reid and the stick torture... ;)

Fabulous job.

Wow, Intense... I really liked it! Good work!

HUH? WOW! Can I have some of whatever your on?

really good...different but really good!

lol!

LOL!

Haha...good grief. You are EVIL!

All I can say is "Whoah man!"

LMAO

Oh sister that was WONDERFUL! Roffle ROFFLE!

Absolutely loved it, and I feel it was written just for me! LOL

Poor poor Hotch! LOL

Thinksshesgotacleversissis xx

Oh god that was brutal!

But it was meant to be, so I guess that meast it was good.

HAHA!

The 'Just a flesh wound' line was the best one in the whole thing, though. LOL Cracked me up.

Fab!

(now write MORE of something else.)