Well what can i say? I finally finished reading ghis fic today... And wow what a read it has been. Every chapter had a purpose, every chapter made me go through so many different emotions. It was as if you had brought the characters to life. Each charcter was developed nicely. Everything belended in well. Even the major OC's had been developed so well that it felt to me like they were real characters from the beyblade universe. The plot was fantastic, the pace was excellent. So much thought and dedication had been put into this fic and it clearly shows!
I honestly cannot believe i hadn't seen this before. I was mearly looking scrolling through and saw this and thought i'd read it. One if the best decisions of my life! This story should be the number 1 fic for beyblade!

I look forward to reading the sequel!

And there was the Pit... The place where Ian will always be haunted by the death of the boy. The fight scene was also spectacular, it's hard to write something like that as interesting but that was vivid and kept me reading. Amazing chapter.

That is. Suspense makes them come back. Then we learn Michaels is dead suddenly, and his body is gone; I wider where it went... But the hospital scene was amazing, I can imagine them saying all that. And Bryan pulling the gun was so Bryan-ish I laughed when it was over. I agree with the teams though; Tala must ahem someone watching over him, or he'd be dead by now. Amazing chapter, I am going to finish reading.

I'm amazed Boris didn't do more. Glasses are a weakness... Proven by the last bit. I was shocks Mikhauk did that, I want to punch him in the face, but Tala's revelations distracted me from that. It's amazing how e was... And it's true. Photographic memory and a kick add smile is all he needs. But then he fell down the hole... That brings backbone next part. I can't believe it... Shocking and interesting, i cant stop now.

And thus, the light is not properly focused in Tala's ees rendering his eyes virtually useless. I remember another reason why he hated them... But I'll wait for it. The laughs and smiles were ally faked; it was amazing to think he could do that after what he went through. And only to, in his eyes, have it thrown back in his face... It breaks a mind. 'When life hands you lemons, grow a lemon tree and throw it back in its face.' Amazing chapter; I'm going to keep on going despite the angst I know will come.

My guess is the only reason Tala got all the way there is Wolborg. She's always been the one Whi helped him when his brothers weren't there. But now I bet he'll yell at his team for puttin themselves into danger like he did. But again the family ties will stop him from doing anything stupid. And he can't see anything... That explains him looking at his hands. Rubbing his eyes thinking the blurriness was just from sleep then realizing it wasn't going away. Nice cliffhanger I must say, it keeps me going...

That was a gruesome scene... The fight was good, it showed Tala' talents well. But the three was just disturbing. It's not often youvgetcaonething as bad as that. It sounded horrible... And the only good that came out of it was that the BBASS and ISABD got their evidence. But at least now he's safe and sound amongst people who actually care. Amazing chapter. A bit gruesome and disturbing, again, but amazing.

Anna has appeared. That's Anna Jones... But now I wonder why her name changed. There's also the question of everything with why she was there and why Viltairw chose her to go see Kai. Just a random lucky girl I guess. And I agree with Tala; spying on Boris is in a sense a death sentence because it is something that is so against the rules. But the redhead is a sneaky little child at times, and I think he'll do fine, since he does live through it all becaus he got shot on the lake. Not the most pleasing future, but a future none te less. And Kai's memory is somewhat there, he just can't pick them out. Shame, if he knew who Luka was really he would be ecstatic... But also concerned because his brother is about to do something incredibly stupid.

Oh my gosh... That was shocking. The aftermath of the crash, and then brother's are enemies. All because Mikhail pushed Kai... It's a sad thing to see. Then just as they begin to fix everything with themselves, Black Dranzer comes along and ruins it all, causing Kai to lose all the memories he has of his brothers and what made him who he was. Unexpected for sure, but it always makes sense. It's so clear, your writing is amazing.

The necklace was his downfall... Who would've thought something so simple as a necklace would amuse such damage. It almost fits, and it goes farther than Kai's emotions almost. Tala loved that necklace; that caused him to get taken away, starting this whole mess. It was certainly a bit unexpected, but at least for a short while things jar improved at the Abbey. So insightful... It reminds me that the world will never be perfect.

And thus, the start of the reason why Tala threw the match. The scenes are amazing, despite the training they still have some of the childish innocence. When Bryan and Spencer arrived it was different and interesting how you made them. Spencer is a living marine biology textbook in a way, and Bryan is the one who's always laughing. Strange to see who thy are now and remember who they'll be present day. So far it's captured my attention, and I know it will stay that way.

I would laugh if I could see a tiny Kai and Tala. I understand where he gets 'Waw-oo', as when a wolf in a sense speaks they say something like wawoo. The description was simple yet perfect; it showed how simple the cells were at the Abbey. I am not at alms surprised Kai taught the boy to speak, even as a child Kai was probably a perfectionist. I know what Kai's mother looks like ad that she is like any mother: fiercely protective of her children. I love how Luka tries to sound out every new word and gets so confused by new words in new places. He sounds like a great kid, for now. At least until the Abbey really sinks in.

I started reading this and got sidetracked by something or another and am coming back. The start was interesting, it makes me wonder where their names come from and who Anna is, and how she's connected to the Demolition boys. A lot to keep people coming back to read, and I wonder what's on the DVD now.

honestly... it's the BEST story eveeeer!

i swear i felt their pain! i even cry!

thank you so much for finishing this story.

This is a truly great Story!