This is amazing! One of the best I've read so far (and I've read a lot lately). I hope things slow down enough in the hopes that you can revisit. It really is too great a story to go unfinished.

Brilliant! Loving it! Please, please, please! Find it in your schedule to update this story and post new chapters! It's so stimulating and it's a shame it's sat unfinished!

I'm sad about Ambrosious' death, but what a lovely chapter.

Please keep writing! I have been waiting YEARS! (I think...) Anyway, this story is REALLY GOOD and it was the first fanfiction I have ever read (somehow that sound wrong grammatically... oh, well), so I REALLY want to read it to the end. You are AMAZING! :D Yay!

This was a good chapter! I like how Jareth is slowly warming up to the festivities. Sorry...

HI! Glad you decided to go on writing as I enjoy your story a lot. I stumbled about your story yesterday and therefore need new chapters ... actually now :-) I hope it wont take you another four years to finish it off then - woah, thats too much tension for me, apart from the fact that I am starting to mix up all the contents of the different stories. Sp, please, go on pretty soon and let us enjoy more of your lovely storytelling! Thank you!N.

Ohhhhh, poor Ambrosius. But it looks like a good Christmas anyway. Maybe Hoggle could give Didymus a new puppy for a present... But you say Jareth's hair is a long ponytail and then you say he has a tail; does that mean a REAL tail?

Liking this story so much. But you really need a beta to fix your terrible spelling and grammar. Still, I'll keep reading.

Interesting, but you need to learn not to run on for several paragraphs about what her room or whatever looks like. You can describe things as much as you like, but do it within a framework of action or context. "Sarah pulled back the gauzy blue curtains on the bed", "Sarah stepped to the windows, where a path of inlaid sapphires had spiraled." That sort of thing. Yes, it takes more time and skill. That's what being a writer is about.

Poor Ambrosius (sniffle cry).

oh do update this story

It's been years since you wrote this, but if you ever go back to it, I'd love to know- what next? This is a very well written version of beauty and the beast, with a twist on the curse and a very spunky heroine.

OH MY GOSH YES!

i cannot get enough of this story! I don't want to rush you, but please write more!

this whole thing is amazing and i love it and i don't like fanfics, ever, but this made me love them so please, please please please write more!

Just showing the fact that Jareth is a mixture of horrible hot head and wonderful sweet heart fully in love is so... clear. and also, you really do use body language that he would use, i was very impressed by that.

thank you so much for writing this fanfic. i can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my god, I don't think I've ever felt so awful for Jareth before... is this going to be continued, I hope? _

Please say your still working on this story. It seems a shame to leave it at that point.

xx