your first fic as huge adorable/smut scene?! you brave soul! I would chicken out the moment my fingers touched the keyboard hahaha
omg this was SO HOT! my favorite otp and amazing smut scenes, this is the greatest moment in my fanfic life...
I really REALLY enjoyed the descriptions you are for the entire scenario, I even enjoyed it more (basically loveliest moment ever) when you introduced all the other characters such as SoRiku, Zexion and Demyx, and you even mentioned ZACK! (oh glob he's alive and standing next to cloud, lifecomplete). Reno was mentioned and in my mind it makes perfect sense to make them brothers, cause seriously...same freaking attributes hahaha oh man! I loved everything! keep up amazing work!

Holy crap that was full blown smut there. Lol

Aww I loved the yaoi! XD although it was a little rushed when it came to Axel doing Roxas but other than that it was awesome! :D great story!

I liked it

Its okay we all love you too :)

?.. uh... do you have any blood transfusions? Or at least blood bags... i am kinda dieing from blood loss here... you see my nose wont stop bleeding from HOW IN CREDIBLY FUCKING HOT SEXY AND JUST FUCKING AWESOME THAT WAS

hell that would turn a straight man gay

Gotta love axle and roxs! great job, but im gunna have to agree with the last sex scene being a little rushed. great none the less.

not terrible at all~! *q* this was amazing~ XD

Oh my god so sexy love it i want axel on my birthday axel himself is so sexy hope hes bi :3

Aw I love you too lol, anyway dont beat urself up u did better than I could evr hope to do. But ur writing style is really cool, amazing :3

that was sexy and amazing!

The rushing at the end of the scene was not bad at all, so don't worry about it.

Poor Roxas... Although I can't say that I really would blame Axel.

this was sooooooo amazing :D Like i said, you're an amazing writer.

stop doubting your words!

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for some strange reason, i was hypervantalating durig the sex scene

That...was HOT! Haha, that was a sweet, sexy oneshot. Good job!