You making me cry. I feel so bad for Kaoru and to top it all off Hikaru dead and he is still playing games like this whith his younger twin brother. Please do a story about the dance soon. Thank you.

Don't create this sappy piece of heart stealing poop only to abandon it, please. I need more. Some form of comfort, I swear, or else I'm going to go mad. I've cried so much more than Kaoru has in this story (although not as strongly). I don't know if I can cope without knowing how it ends.

ugh cant believe this was unfinished, so sad yet such a good story

Please update soon, i really want to continue reading this...i love this story

GAHHHHHHHH! YOU MUST UPDATE IMMEDIATLY!

I'm glad you pm'd me, I had forgotten about this fanfic. I had to reread it to refresh my memory. It is so very thought out and touching. You actually had me tearing up at one point and I am not in any way shape or form a sappy crybaby kind of person with movies or stories or anything. I can really feel the heart behind this and the well thought out emotional roller coaster that Kaoru is going on. I'm almost curious if your writing from a lost experience somehow or if its pure imagination alone. Having a close relative of mine pass away that lived with me a few months ago I can tell you rereading this story is almost spooky. You really capture how someone feels in these sort of times. I commend you for going back and promising to finish up your story. I'm just sad I have to wait for another chapter. jk. Keep up the great work, you've made me a fan.

Aww, poor Kaoru! I remember the first time I read this I cried slightly. So glad you updated (even if i'm late reading this).

Sooo I don't think I have any criticism...that's new. I'll say though that you're writing is really good and I love the story so far! :)

I am really enjoying this story! I like how it's in Kaoru's perspective (you don't see that often) and overall how you portray him. His reactions and reasoning are spot on :) By the way, I love your writing style. You create great imagery, and suck the reader in _ Keep up the awesomeness!

: ) I caught the manga references!

Poor Kaoru, saying things that'll hurt others even after he realizes he can't lose them. I think Haruhi will be pretty upset, if not offended, and someone else may need to remind Kaoru that they're all missing Hikaru.

I really want to know where this whole game is going! No good Hikaru, always messing with us!

Thanks for writing~

OMG NOT A CLIFFHANGER! Damn cliffhangers! Now you GOTTA update quick or I swear I'm gonna di-i-iie! And if I die your coming with me ;-)

I LOVED how good this chapter was! You could see Kaoru's personality changing every so often, and then reaching a climax and him taking it out on Haruhi.. Really well written!

A good thing about this story too is how minimal the grammar mistakes are :-) that makes me happy XD

Hurry up and update!

~*Ruby*~ - pretty fancy, huh? XD

I'm gonna cry eventually, aren't I?

Stop it! you're making me cry! I mean literally tears are streaming down my face right now. Oh my gosh... poor Kaoru. I cannot imagine how he would feel...

PLEAAAAAASE upload quick! I've just read them all and they're amazing! Make sure to tell me when the next one is up, I'm well excited!

Awh, I dot know of I'm being too sensitive but the beginning made me cry :'( great chapter though!ox

Please continue this story! it's sooo good, I just can't wait to find th next clue! :D