| Reviews for Vanilla Salt |
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   divyvicki chapter 12 . 6/8 I think this is more of an epilogue than a sequel. |
| divyvicki chapter 11 . 6/8 Nice ending! |
| divyvicki chapter 10 . 6/8 Jacob/Bella pairing? Good luck with that! |
| divyvicki chapter 9 . 6/8 So now is he going to acknowledge his love for her? |
| divyvicki chapter 8 . 6/7 Guess it had to happen the way they were going at it like rabbits. |
| divyvicki chapter 6 . 5/30 Loved that Jasper is doing the chasing! |
| divyvicki chapter 5 . 5/30 Somehow I’m thinking Esme was a rebel equivalent in her time. |
| divyvicki chapter 4 . 5/29 Edward sure is demanding! |
| divyvicki chapter 3 . 5/29 She needs to nip this Jacob behavior in the bud! |
| divyvicki chapter 1 . 5/29 Great start! |
| Epicnezzzer chapter 11 . 8/31/2016 Darling, there's such a thing as too fast in a plot. you've brought on too many developments, without rational time for the processing and comprehension of the events. You have been great so far, this story is very fun and interesting. Maybe next time set it in the past instead, as if they were in grade or middle school, because this whole perfect and rebel thing isn't too logical. also, you might want to integrate the volturi children more, because they just show up and leave. overall, great work, but make sure you plan your stories first, at least get a general idea in your head. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/29/2015 I know she is 17 but my god she is so childish! Like 12/13 childish! The way her brain works is just so immature! The poor child she is going to be bringing into this world |
| jterry453 chapter 12 . 10/5/2015 Uhh what? |
| frostedglaze chapter 12 . 9/30/2015 I loved this story. I was sent here by someone looking for this story, and I am glad I did. Though was that it for the sequel? Just one chapter? |
| bellawu chapter 12 . 11/5/2013 Love this story! I'm sad to see it end :( I wish you will write more. 10 years after maybe? |
