PLEASE JASMIN DON'T LET US HANGING HERE! WE NEED MORE, WE NEED WHAT SHONDA DIND'T GIVE US!

lOVE,

NIEVES

Ah Jasmin... I'd love to hear your thoughts on the finale. Mer has grown so much. I love your version of the finale. You had some really great scenes in there. We will need some closure though - I'm still shocked and saddened. They want the same things - now they have to move forward from there. You totally called the story in your other works. I still think Shonda reads your fic. ;) Beautiful work.

Another awesome chapter Jasmin. I really loved these snippets. I don't know why, but the one with Cristina at the end was my favorite. I love how you have included her in the family and built that relationship between her and Derek. They have come a long way. I did get a kick out of Cris having her own room. Loved the little missing scenes. So much goodness!

Yes. You have to come back and fill in the blanks. Especially after what fetch did last night to our pair. Couldn't she at least be there when he woke up? Seriously? After everything that happened I wouldn't think she would have left his side until he did. Yes...come back and fill in the blanks please.

Great job...I can't stand Altman, wish she'd been hit and had to retire because of her injury...loved the way you made that wish come true here. I wish the show would've ended your way, don't want to say too much for the readers who haven't watched it yet. Again, wonderful job.

Cal

hi...love your fanfic...especially the last two chapters!

keep going :)!

Hi, Jasmin!

I liked the chapter and I wish it would happen the same on the show. I haven't watched the season finale yet and probably won't watch it until Sunday, but from what I've heard from people who did I don't think I'll like it that much ...:(

Jasmin, first of all, your story is beautiful, so full of hope and love and beautiful language. Secondly, I actually started to cry for the first time since the finale started when I read your story about how Derek survives and the baby's fine and they're all happy. I think I needed to get out those few tears, so thanks! But really, your story is great! Keep writing (I need to read an optimistic view of the finale's outcome).

I like your version. That was "overkill" in every sense of the word. Why couldn't they at least let her keep the baby. Next yeR will be nothing but psycho drama. Derek and Meredith will handle the guilt and grief well. Probably pull apart- dammit Shondra. Couldn't you leave them with one thing that would have pled them through ?

I love it and I really hope MerDer survive tonight's season finale.

Brandy

Very fun chapter! I was in the hospital for knee surgery (yeah, finally...I know!) and getting to sit up and catch up little by little. It was so wonderful to find this one waiting for me! Excellent work, as always!

Cal

really good chapter...it was funny and sweet

I'm sorry, I missed a few updates!

Thanks you so much for giving us the Merder time that Shonda won't let us have! I love it!

I fear for the finale!

Great conversation with the talk about the adoring June/April girl. I'm thinking that tonight might be her last appearance on the show if you know what I mean. I once had Mark be confused about a one night stand he completey wanted to forget. Heather/Jasmin...and it was ROSE. Funny stuff.

Love the talk about the babies. Yes. Lot's of practicing might result in a unplanned, sort of planned pregnancy. I hope it's true. And remains true.

I was caught off guard by the house plans resurfacing again AND the statement that ground had been broken the day he was made chief. But I'll take what I can get.

Loved how you had Derek and Cris getting closer and she's got her own room. Not to live there, but for the occassional sleep over and NOT be in their bed!

I was missing the bromance of Mark and Derek so I liked the golf scene. But I wish he had gone home to Mer and talked to her too.

Ausiello wrote that if we thought the first ten minutes was intense the rest of it is not for the faint of heart. They had better not do harm to McBaby if it is for real. Still not sure about that.

Looking forward to your next update. Tonight? Before the show?

I want to read it so please post it. I will miss this fic when it is done.

Brandy