Dats nt fair Y u writers create a MBA amazin fanfics then later stop

I want to tip my hat off to you and give u a round of applause...for a job damn well done. However, I am very concerned as to why you did not update or try and finish such a wonderful story?. I love and enjoy the cold chilling terrifying demeanor of Itachi Uchiha as well as the contrast of Hyuga Hinata. Now, you stop updating this story at a very vital part...and that part is where Uchiha Sasuke would enter the story. Itachi sea to be a man of ruthless and very mysterious. Now, what is he planning and more importantly how gravely of a danger will Hinata life be by associating with the Uchiha?

Wow! Itachi is definetly a piece of work. Is he a big time player? And, why domy he just kiss Hinata? That would probaly give his curiosity a few answers. Also, Itachi knows that Jin is inlove with a human. And, it seems that Jin is not too fond of Sora and it seems Itachi is quiet weary of her as well. What is her game besides wanting to be Itachi wife? What is it she hope to gain through Itachi?

Very interesting...this is where the ball starts rolling

Who is the sphere? And, Vladimir and Esmeralda ...it seems to me that they are not to be trusted. As for Jin, why did he disappear so suddenly? Is he trustworthy as well?
I must commend you for piquing my interest after reading this one chapter...which was nicely written, and answer my thoughts while finishing one paragraph to an next

Noooo! How could you leave me like that! UPDATE!

I wanna know what happens next!

Uchisur

Pls Update soon!Can't wait for the next chapter too _

This is very interesting.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh, what a development. I wonder what will happen now that Sasuke knows. I look forward to more. Keep up the great work and I hope you can update soon. Cheers!

THIS... CHAPTER... WAS FREAKIN AWESOME! 3 i had soooooooo much butterflies in my stomache while reading this! itachi *o* so CLOOOSE TO HINATA! 3 gooosh LUCKY GOOOSE! 3 LOL! siiigh itachi has a really handsome personality in this story! I LOVE IT! keep it up! :3

*DIES FROM UNFATHOMABLE SPAZZES OF JOY!* IIIIIIII THIS STORY! *o*)0 I GET BUTTERFLIES IN MY STOMACHE! XD itachi is soooooo darn... alluring! GAAAAAAAAAAH! TT)0 you... are... ABSOLUTELY... A GREAT WRITER! XDDD i can see everything play in my head! gaaaaaaah! I CANT WAIT TO READ MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAR! xD MORE MORE WOOOOOOOT! oh maaan *o*)0 *droools* itachixhinata... 3 BEST COUPLE EVER! and this STORY PROVES IT! you need some work with grammer BUT HECK! I DONT CARE! XD THE STORY IS DAAAAAAARN FREAKIN GREEEAAATT! i cant express how IN LOVE I AM with this story! ahhahahahaha OH MAAAAN! OH MAAAAN! i wonder how sasuke is gonna take this? TT)0 from what im reading so far... honestly... this sasuke might get .05% of my care for him XD becuase i dislike sasuke so much O_O SO YOU DONO HOW MUCH IM ACTUALLY CONSIDERING ABOUT SASUKE BEING "a tiny insy winsy cool" LOL LOL! just because he is so loyal to itachi BUUUUUUUUUUUUUT! O_O then again i dono xD maybe with more chapters i'll think about it.. xD reconsider or something LOL THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR THE STORY! GAAAH! i am totally in love with this ITACHI! 3 lucky lucky hinata! w)0 ItaHina 3

I really loved this chapter. i do wish other Akaski will show up?

I like how its not like all the other vampire fics.

love it !

OMG i LOVE this stroy it's sooo good so could you pleasssssss pretty pleassssss make the nex chapter i cant wait and i think her ex is NARUTO :P